Page 1 of 1

Practice Makes Perfect (Drabble Challange # 8)

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 8:33 am
by War Dove
Never did a drabble before, so this is my first (no pun intended) .

The idea came to me, I hope ya guys like.


Title: Practice Makes Perfect
Rating: G
Word Count: 120
Pairing: 1xR


~~~~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~~~


Sighing, Relena stared down at her boyfriend.

“I told you to lick your lips first. I can’t help you if your mouth doesn’t cooperate.”

Heero looked up at her. “I’m trying it’s just...”

“It’s your first time doing this, a little more practice and you’ll be as good at it as Duo.”

“Duo’s had a lifetime of practice.”

She pushed him back down, stopping him from rising. “No excuse. Now stay down there, and try not to drool.”

He remained sitting in the chair. Soon the corners of his mouth turn upward, his lips parted and the pearly white of his teeth showed.

Relena gasped in delight. “That’s it! I knew you could smile Heero, if you really, really tried!”

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 3:43 pm
by J Alberghini
Aw, Heero's smiling. :D Good job!

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 4:54 pm
by AngelOfDeath
Hehe

Ooooo. ::pinches Heero's cute smiling face.... has gun drawn on her::

:eek:

Good times.

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 5:23 pm
by Morrighan
Aww... That was cute!! Heero's first smile! :D

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 9:51 pm
by Elyn Yuy
huh, But he smiled evily in the first episode.

after laughing evily.

:salute: Elyn Yuy

Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 10:00 pm
by Morrighan
Elyn Yuy wrote: huh, But he smiled evily in the first episode.

after laughing evily.
But that doesn't count. It wasn't a REAL smile. That was more like a smirk. That laugh in the Japanese version (no dub! Yay!) scared the sh*t out of me the first time I heard it... I worship Hikaru Midorikawa; he rocks my world with his sexy voice and his awesome singing. :D

Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2003 12:54 am
by raine_yuy
*LOL*

That was friggin funny. Relena having to teach Heero how to smile? Haha. And the thought of Heero drooling while learning such a basic thing is just...strange. But very cute and well...sappy. Great job for a first drabble. Although for a minute there my hentai mind was picturing something else happening with those two. Har har.

Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2003 5:55 am
by Beck
You know, this also could lead a person to think she was teaching him to whistle. Both ideas fit him though. In fact, it also sounded like something that Sousuke would have to learn and not look like he was straining, kinda like him "smiling" for his transfer papers in the first season (same eps as the condom bit)