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Sticky Sweet (drabble #8)
Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 4:54 am
by Beck
WEEEEEE! I had fun trying to write this one out. I wrote so much I had to take alot of it out *sighs* I know its a bit weird for Heero's first but this is something I'm sure he had yet to taste. So it is a first for him.
Title: Sticky Sweet
Rating: G
Word Count: 120
Pairing: 1xR
Relena walked back to him with her purchase and went on to explain how she made sure she got some when the Fair came to town. She held a piece to his mouth waiting to see what he would do.
He reached out and plucked it from her fingers. It was light and fluffy to the touch but melted in his mouth with sugary sweetness. A bit stuck to her fingers when she offered him some more. To her surprise, he brought her hand to his lips and sucked on her finger, getting the last of the spun sugar.
He licked his lips and smiled at her. ?I think I can get use to this stuff you call cotton candy.?
Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 8:15 am
by Morrighan
Eee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *giggles* That was cute!! It's definitely out of the norm, yet it makes sense! Great job!
Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2003 10:29 pm
by Beck
Morrighan wrote:Eee!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *giggles* That was cute!! It's definitely out of the norm, yet it makes sense! Great job!
I think thats why I liked writing this one so much. It was totally something out of whacked that no one else would've thought about doing. Plus after going to 6 Flags myself last weekend and plus knowing that Sept is usually State Fair's, I had it on my mind.
Thanx chickie! Glad you liked
Posted: Thu Sep 18, 2003 12:49 am
by raine_yuy
Hahaha!
I was waiting for someone to write a response that actually involves cotton candy. That was hilarious. That was too cute. And having Heero lick Relena's fingers...YEAH. Are you feeling better now? You finally got to counter the angst i made you write the last time. As much as it hurts me to give out a sappy challenge. Hehe.
Great job, hon!
Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2003 5:52 am
by Beck
raine_yuy wrote:Hahaha!
I was waiting for someone to write a response that actually involves cotton candy. That was hilarious. That was too cute. And having Heero lick Relena's fingers...YEAH. Are you feeling better now? You finally got to counter the angst i made you write the last time. As much as it hurts me to give out a sappy challenge. Hehe.
Great job, hon!
I wasn't sure if anyone else would've thought about writing what I did or not, but I must say it fits for being the right amount of fluff. Gotta mix fluff in with the fluff. And after just coming from 6 Flags last weekend, seeing all that type of amusement park food made me think about what to choose for his first.
Are you feeling better now?
Why yes...yes I am
And Heero's been nibbling on my ankles about pushing me into that make up sex fic, said that he couldn't stand the hurt and rejection anymore. I got a few things thought up for it, hopefully I can pull it off.
Posted: Sat Sep 20, 2003 4:50 pm
by Andrea
Oohh!! I liked this very much. Too cute.
- Andrea Sinisterra
Posted: Tue Sep 23, 2003 2:25 am
by Beck
Andrea Sinisterra wrote:Oohh!! I liked this very much. Too cute.
- Andrea Sinisterra
Glad ya liked chickie. Anything to bring a smile to my face and the fans out there is enough to please me (aside from craving cotton candy myself)