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His First I Love You (Drabble #8)

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2003 3:33 am
by raine_yuy
<b>Title:</b> Atonement

<b>Rating:</b> PG 13
<b>Word Count:</b> 116 (gahh.)
<b>Pairing:</b> 1xR


He stood before the mute angel, his coat danced with the breeze and whipped against his form. His solitude mimicked the angel?s serenity. He stepped forward and paid a very rare tribute to the woman frozen in immortal time before him. He touched cold cheeks and whispered words he had buried beneath the dirt and soil of his soul only to fall on deaf ears. The angel had lost her ability to hear.

?I love you, Relena??

Such declaration and submission. The first time, when it ceased to matter to anyone anymore. The angel only resembled the form of the woman he now offered everything. The stone angel who guarded the woman buried underneath the soil.




<b>Note:</b> Mwuahahahahahahaha!!! Oh, there's no stopping me!

Raine: Shield activator!

BI Members: Crap! Now we can't penetrate her with the death glare!

Wicked: How the hell are we suppose to stop her?

*Enters MiakaMouse with her now infamous periwinkle taffeta*

MiakaMouse: You've done it now, woman! You must pay for such treachery!

Raine: *forming a karate pose and trying her best to immitate Trinity of the Matrix* Bring it on!


Har har. I couldn't help it guys! The only way to stop this is if someone wrote a very fluffy drabble to counter against my dark forces. A very pink fluffy drabble that resembles cotton candy. Hmmm...cotton candy. *Drools*

Errr...right.

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2003 3:46 am
by Beck
AAAAAAAAAACCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!! Evil EVIL ONNA!!!

Gotta rack my brain on this drabble.

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2003 7:00 am
by wicked
In the words of gamers: W00T!!! More angst!! Bring it on baby!!!

Just as long as Ryan doesn't get me back for my last drabble entry.... Go Raine!

I've only done one actual fluffy-esque one-shot..... I think I filled my quota for the year. Acutally I think I passed it.

~Wicked

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2003 9:25 am
by RyanEX2000
You're trying to tempt me.ME!!!

Dear,dear Wicked you should know better than that.But anyway writing drabbles might not be for me since my attempts have all crossed the 150 mark.Dang 100 limit.
I'll keep trying though.Oh and I WILL get you back.Just so you know.

Really must do something about your angstyness.I wonder if Miaka's recruiting.....

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2003 10:28 am
by Faye Faye
That was so beautiful and touching. If only he hadn't taken so long... :(

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2003 10:57 am
by miaka mouse
RyanEX2000 wrote: Really must do something about your angstyness.I wonder if Miaka's recruiting.....
woohoo!! i'm always up for having minions.. welcome on board! :salute: pick a uniform in your choice of pastels... i'll have to clone the sap bunny so u can terrorize ppl too!

fun fun!

<?__)~ (off to her secret lab to do some DNA copying)

www.livejournal.com/~miakamouse

Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2003 3:58 pm
by Morrighan
Awwww..........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You just had to make it angst!!! :cry:

Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2003 3:28 pm
by lilac310
:cry: so sad!!!!!!