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Broken Hearts (drabble #7...again!)

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:55 pm
by miaka mouse
haha raine!! i did it... i found a loophole in ur challenge and made it WAFFy!!

eat ur heart out babe! or at least have some cookies...

Broken Hearts
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1xR
word count: 103

He didn't know what possessed him to join her in the kitchen, but when she decided to bake cookies for Valentine's Day, he was right beside her. They decided to make it a contest, each preparing their own batch of heart-shaped cookies to be judged by the other.

The oven timer went off with a ding and Heero went to pull out both trays, always worried about her safety even to the point of getting her fingers burnt. He laid out both on the stovetop with a small frown marring his features.

“My hearts are broken.”

“That’s ok, Heero. You can have mine.”

Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2003 2:49 am
by raine_yuy
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! :o


DOH! :x I can't believe the evilness that you posess, woman. To turn a wonderfully angsty theme into a cute little fluff piece. Ohhh...you will pay! Har. I was so enjoying the black ink of angst i've managed to spread throughout this forum and you go and ruin it. EVIL. you are pure evil ruining my plot to turn all into angsty little evil minions.

Ok, i'm crossing the line into weirdness. That was cute though. Props to you for figuring out that clever little loophole. But then, you are the Queen of Drabbles so that was somewhat expected. Hehe. can't wait what you come up with next!

Posted: Thu Sep 11, 2003 5:38 pm
by Eienvine
WAFFilicious! Hee hee! I loved it- that was so sappy I'm going to have to go brush my teeth. And nice job getting around the angsty theme! Way to go!

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2003 5:02 am
by Beck
YAY! This was way cute, a small ray of sunshine through all the depressing break ups with the two hehehehehee.

But I also can't stop laughing at Raine's responce to you. Your so sneaky Mighty Mouse! :salute:

Posted: Fri Sep 12, 2003 3:22 pm
by melodrama
*high fives Miaka* You Go Girl!!! Whheeeeee!!! :bounce: :bounce:

Just when I thought I was about to drown under the current wave of angst... Superficcywriter (aka Miaka Mouse) comes to the rescue.

So cute!! Very clever! Thank You!

Love Mel

Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2003 11:05 am
by Morrighan
Aww....!!! That's so cute!! I was just about to drown in all the angst this drabble has created!! Wonderful job! *gives high five*

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 2:02 pm
by Andrea
Oh, my GOD!! Hahaha!! I'm going ballistic!! How could you do that!? Hahaha!! So, so cute...

- Andrea Sinisterra