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Unreal (Drabble #7)

Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2003 12:50 pm
by SimplyTurquoise
Title: Unreal (Drabble #7)
Rating: PG
Word Count: 118
Pairing: 1xR

He could feel it, the strings around his heart gathering. A lingering pain forgotten as he felt the very heart he had craved pound against his ribcage. Almost as if trying to break free.

He turned to Relena only to have his smile slip away. She looked pained, her small hand rising into the air. A small flash of light on metal his only warning.

A small gasp made it pass his lips as he watched the knife imbedded in his heart, a dark crimson spreading like vines.

Turning his eyes to her, he watched her lips form words he had heard too often as of a late.

?You?re not real Heero.?

And then everything went black.

Authors Note: I?ve had Relena stabbing Heero with knives a bit too much lately? tsk!

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2003 4:33 pm
by Eienvine
Whoah! Scary! Relena stabbing Heero? Totally unexpected . . . but I guess it would break his heart, right? In more than one way! Ooh, that brings up a creepy mental image. Anyway, a bit scary, but I liked it a lot! Nice job!

Posted: Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:15 pm
by Faye Faye
That's kinda....Cruel...Good writing, but...Cruel

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 2:08 pm
by Andrea
My thoughts exactly: Woah! So unexpected!! But original... I liked it!

- Andrea Sinisterra