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Tantalize (Drabble #7)

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 4:15 pm
by The Young Alcoholic
Eh...I think I could have done better but o welz. You can blame my damn school work for it. :evil:

Tantalize
PG-13
107 words
..it ain't Heero and Relena I can tell you that.


It was official announced yesterday that she was to be wed in three months from now. He was a very close friend of her's. They meet during high school and continued their relationship afterwards. He was a dark and mysterious type of man. Handsome in every way. But....it wasn't him.

So their he stood, outside her balcony window as he watched her roll around with her fiancee. Hearing her moan out a name that wasn't his. Wishing that it was his name that she would cry out in pleasure and wanting, but it wasn't.

He quietly walked away, before throwing a diamond ring into the garden pond.

Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2003 10:09 am
by Gundam Girl
You depress me...But it was good!

Posted: Sat Sep 13, 2003 8:50 pm
by Shooting Gundam Star
*sobs* Sad....very...very....sad....but good!

Posted: Sun Sep 14, 2003 8:41 pm
by Faye Faye
OMG!!! That was so heart wrenching. How can you write something like that without getting sick to your stomach....with emptiness...on the other hand...I Would have taken the ring...I'm available...and I definately wouldn't choose anyone else...God, Just thinking about this fic has me shaking... :cry:

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 1:57 pm
by Andrea
Wow, that was cruel!! Heart wrenching!! Very good, very good, very good.... Can I go fish for that ring now?

- Andrea Sinisterra