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No Regrets (Drabble Challenge #7)

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 11:00 pm
by wicked
Disclaimer: Don't own GW. Don't sue WC.

First attempt at a Drabble Challenge. I wanted to try and make you guys imagine on your own the scene without giving too much information. Hope it goes along with the Break Heero's Heart theme. Torturing that man is too much fun to pass up.

Title: No Regrets
Word Count: 117
Rating: PG I suppose
Pairing: 1xR, Rx?

A promise made.

?No regrets.?

Light flickering from a fireplace; shock and pain permeating his body.

A small malicious smile, still beautiful, playing across her lips.

Steps sounding, entering the room; stopping.

A cruel grin, a smirk, and vicious laughter.

?So tell me Yuy, how does it feel??

?How does what feel??

A cruel grin, a smirk, and vicious laughter all growing.

?How does it feel to be second best? To know you aren?t number one? To know you weren?t her first lover??

They?re all lies! Prussian blue flicker between the two.

?Fu?.?

An explosion; a body falls. Death.

?I won?t tolerate such language.? The man walks to his wife, embracing her. ?Regrets Miss Relena??

?No regrets.?

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 12:59 am
by Beck
ACK! Man oh man, the hell that we're putting Heero through. Hmmm....once I can get my brain working again, I think this calls for some makeup sex between 1xR, and believe me, Heero has ALOT of making up to do hehehehehehehe

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 2:17 am
by raine_yuy
Holy crap!

That takes the price for the most cruel response to this challenge yet. Most people just have Relena reject Heero and break his heart but you...well, you go beyond that pain and actually have Relena's new "love" shoot Heero after breaking his heart. Now that is the ultimate "Break Heero's Heart" drabble. Haha. Awesome job!

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 2:38 am
by shadowcat
did i miss something or did Heero just died?

-Shadow

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 5:13 am
by RyanEX2000
ohhh....oh,oh,oh!!

That is just so wrong...mental note to self...must torture Quatre.

Anyways,that is truly the ulmitae rejection,not only from the one you love,but to be shot by er new lover.

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 11:03 pm
by wicked
*snickers* Thanks Raine. Do I get a present? :D I'm pleased with it. I'm sure I can come up with others but I think this is enough for this particular drabble.

Ryan, not only did her new lover shoot Heero, but it was a former comrade. But I think you tuned in on that on your own.

ShadowCat, oh you betcha!!

Beck, you write it and I'll read it. :lol:

Thanks a bunch guys. This was my first non-OT or OF post in a long ol' time.

~Wicked

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 2:14 pm
by Andrea
Wha-? Huh? Crap! CRUEL, Wicked! Plain CRUEL! I'm in shock... really. Awesome drabble.

- Andrea Sinisterra

Posted: Mon Sep 15, 2003 5:30 pm
by Faye Faye
OMG! That's too cruel. I have one question for everyone, exactly what is the purpose of a drabble? Is a drabble in general anything related to Relena "hating" Heero? I'm not quite catching on...the stories are well written, but not pleasant...I LIKE the Relena and Heero Pairing...I'm confuzzeled....

Faye Faye