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Betrayal (Drabble #7)

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 3:25 pm
by J Alberghini
Disclaimer: Gundam Wing belongs to a lot of people way richer than I.
Title: Betrayal
Pairings: one sided 1xR (of course), 2xR
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 107

Betrayal

"What the-" Heero gaped at the scene before him. Relena stared back, no remorse in her eyes. Her partner, his arms around her, glared at him.
"D-Duo!" Heero's voice trembled. "Get away from her!"
The man was about to reply, but Relena shook her head. "No, Heero, he won't."
Heero leapt for him and pulled him up by the throat. "I thought you were my friend!"
"A real friend doesn't leave his friends behind," Duo said coldly.
Heero let go. "Relena, you can't-- You said you'd wait--"
"Things are different now," she said simply. She gestured to the window through which he'd entered. "Get out."

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 6:46 pm
by Eienvine
Whoah! Harsh! No remorse! Relena can be so mean when she wants to. Ha ha. Serves Heero right that she hooked up with his best friend. Wahoo! I like it.

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 7:23 pm
by amateur_storyteller
WAHHH! My poor little Heero/Relena heart is crushed!!!! Poor Heero-chan!!!!


BTW, what is a DRABBLE? And where do you find the challenges? Who issues them? *_*

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 7:30 pm
by Adaon
If you look down the list of topics on this forum you'll see "raine_yuy" posted "Drabble Challenge #7" which contains the theme of the challenge, which is a 100 word story (up to 120) following a theme, in this case Heero's heart getting broken.

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 9:04 pm
by Elyn Yuy
Ouch.

That burns. nods.

You guys are really getting him in the mean spots.

1. Relena

2. The braided bakka


good job on the drabble.

:salute: Elyn Yuy

Posted: Thu Sep 04, 2003 10:01 pm
by WhiteWindRRose
hah.
sure it was gut wrenching.... but enjoyable!!!
the harsher, the better.
maybe i'm just sick that way.... :wink: :-P
HEE-CHAN MUST PAY!

*click of revolver in distance*

uh-oh. i'm out

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 1:01 am
by Beck
I could see that happening, he trying to step in where he has no right to be. Thats what you get for being a bad boy Heero *tsk tsk*

Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2003 2:15 am
by raine_yuy
Wonderful!


I love the fact that he came through the window and Relena kicked him out the same way. That just made the impact of Relena rejection somehow more...Heero-ish. Hehe. Great job!