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Stained (drabble #6...again)

Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2003 1:21 pm
by miaka mouse
and...another one... -_-;;

raine!!! i have to stop this!! ::sigh:: who am i kidding? i luv it... i tried for real drama but all i got was angst...

Stained

2+R?
PG
angst! (slightly graphic)
word count: 100! yeah perfect! ...including title

The first thing she saw was his hair. His beautiful chestnut hair. Locks had come undone from his usually impeccable braid. Now, it looked frayed and old, like the hair of a doll well loved and well used.

She crept closer, as if afraid to wake him. His head was turned away, giving her a clear view of the back of it. She had to look away, to the bottom of that unkempt braid, away from the back of that skull.

The back of that bloodied skull, where strands of chestnut were stained burgundy with clumps of drying blood.

Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2003 1:42 pm
by freelight01
Ok, its a efficial, YOU dear mouse of mine, is anghts author. I love your fics, really i do, as they are always brilliantly written with intense emotions that are almost palpable, yet i always hate the endings, they are so SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why o why do you like sad endings?!?!?

Posted: Mon Aug 25, 2003 2:14 pm
by Morrighan
O.o Oh my..... That is scary.... You did a great job pulling this one off!

Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2003 6:28 pm
by miaka mouse
thanx for the comments guys :)

but freelight...i can't for the life of me remember having sad endings to either of my fics..have u confused me with someone else?

sad endings always make me feel bad for my charas... in fact i feel so bad that i wrote another drabble for duo... a funny one... it should be up in 'believe your love' shortly...

luv y'all!

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