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My first angst (give me strength)

Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2003 7:02 pm
by Elyn Yuy
Like my title says, this is my first attempt at an angst fic. Give me your opinion. Please, I may need it. :roll:
By the way, Hilde is in this one. Not Elyn. :cry:

Disclaimer: I don't OWN Gundam Wing. Or the Characters.



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One week after...


Duo visited Miliardo and Noin at the manor. It had been a month since it happened. Hilde was home with Daniel and Hilary. It took him three days to get there for the funeral. When Noin greeted him with a small very tired smile. Her eyes were shot. Miliardo came up behind her with the same expression on his face. Duo must have looked like they did because Noin gave him a pitying look and hugged him. Tears that usually never met his eyes flowed down his face. "Sorry I'm late. Rush hour is killer here and-"

Noin just nodded and pulled him inside. Miliardo held her shoulders as she shook with her sobs. Sally was in the living room, sitting next to Wufei and Quatre. Trowa and Catherine were in the kitchen, helping Pagan with the tea. Quatre's eyes were red. Wufei was glowering at nothing really. Sally held him to her. The only thing she could do without stopping him from yelling in Chinese about, her.

"I still can't believe, she's really gone." Quatre said quietly. Miliardo went up to the fireplace and took a long look into the fire. Its embers slowly dying, he came close to burning his hair.

"Zechs, your hair." Noin said softly as she passed the teacup to him.

"What does it matter?" he said bitterly. He looked at her apologetically as he took the cup.

"Anyone find him?" Trowa asked hopefully. Everyone shook their heads sadly. Then the doorbell rang. Noin started to rise but Sally signaled her to stay and sit. When she came back, Une followed her in. "Everyone." she acknowleged them with a nod."We can't find Heero anywhere. Our sources believe that he's going after her attacker."

Wufei grumbled something in Chinese that sounded offly similar to "At least someone is."

"I was hoping that you could find him, and bring him back."

"...We should. It's what she would want."Quatre said quietly.

"Let's go then." Trowa and Duo said as one. Duo hid his sorrow and pity for Heero in his best winning smile."Let's get the stupid ingrate."

"There's something else. I believe he took the gundam."

"Oh yipee." Duo said sarcastically.
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Heero's glare on the old man at the scrap yard was colder than the dead.

"Listne here, fella. I don't want trouble that that scrap there is gonna cause me. I don't need Preventers stealing my business, and that scrap of Gundanium is gonna get me that kind of trouble."

Heero flashed the Preventer insignia and started to load up the head of the gundam that he thought was rusted and trashed. However, it had been restored by the old man and the only thing it needed now was the computer circuits and the pilot. Him.

"Geez! I- I uh didn't know. Keep it!" He yelled as he ran towards his shack on the scrap heap.

'Hold on Zero. I know that the last battle was supposed to be the last battle.But I need your help for this.'

Relena. I will kill them.




more soon.

:salute: Elyn Yuy

Posted: Tue Aug 19, 2003 6:03 pm
by athena
*splutters* Relena's....DEAD??

Heero better kick their sorry little butts. Write more soon, please!

It's great so far! Wing Zero's back? This could be interesting!

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 7:34 pm
by Shooting Gundam Star
SGS: *eyes open wide* Who?....What?....When?.....Where?......GREG! I'm frightened. GREAT job! Thta was so neat...you never could be 100% shure who died till Heero's thought at the end... very nice...

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 10:44 pm
by Andrea
Great start, Elyn... are you SURE this is your first angst??? Please, do continue. I'm waiting. Really, great job.

BUT... HOW COULD YOU KILL RELENA!!!??
<taking DEEP breaths> Okay. Sorry. :wink:


Huggies,
Drew!

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 10:55 pm
by Morrighan
...What?!?!?! No!!! I wanna see more of this!!! I really want to see more!!!!

Posted: Wed Aug 20, 2003 11:11 pm
by Elyn Yuy
IT'S AN ANGST!!!!!

pants hard.

It is supposed to be sad, isn't it?

I'll write more soon.

PWOMISE!

:salute: Elyn Yuy