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Argh! 2 (Drabble 5)

Posted: Mon Aug 04, 2003 11:18 pm
by AngelOfDeath
I know I know. I totally should have written the second one with the whipped cream one. But it slipped my mind. . . and then it was over! This was good times though.

Words: 100 (yes!)





Heero took another fortifying shot of tequila. His fifth.

He would go up and tell her this time.

The way she bent just so in front of him. The lower and lower cuts her blouses took. The manner her pens traveled in and out of her mouth when she was 'thinking'.

He had played dumb long enough; he was getting smarter with every shot.

"Relena, no more games." He?d say.

There she was!

"Relena," Heero?s world swam as he touched her arm. "No more. . . ."

". . .tequila for you." She finished for him as he passed out.




:D

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 11:39 am
by Eienvine
Perfect! I loved it. Excellent job, there. I am very impressed.

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 11:51 am
by Tomorrow
Ooooooooh, the irony!!!! Just when Heero was about to reveal his feelings... he passes out. Very cute, and it packed a good, comedic punch for only about 100 words. Wonderful job. :D

Oh, and thanks for all of your great reviews!!!! :wink:

Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2003 12:15 pm
by fubberr
omg...lol i that grrrrrrrreat~!!~ (no i am not tony the scary tiger)

I knew this would be good..o0o0...i cant wait for the next ones to pop out.. and this one in exactly 100 words..wow

hahah.. heero..drunk..passes out...yea ...ggreat job there!

Write another one!! CAUSE I LOVE UR STOIRES AOD.. *_* *_*



well. .I'm off! keep it up :D:D:D:D:D:D :-P *_* :-P :salute: :bounce:

Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2003 11:12 pm
by Morrighan
*falls over laughing* Oh my Goddess.... THAT WAS FRICKIN' BRILLIANT!!!! Great job, girl!!

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Posted: Sun Aug 17, 2003 3:22 pm
by Chronalax
Ha! That was good. What's this drabble thing? are they supposed to be this short? Anyway, I even though there wasn't that much, I could still picture everything. great job!

Chronalax