Blissful Ignorance

Posted: **Mon Jul 21, 2003 4:50 pm**

Word Count:87

~Forever~

She yelled at him.

He yelled at her.

They sat down and stared.

She looked at him.

He looked at her.

She stuck her tongue out.

He made an obscene jester.

?If you don?t want me I?ll leave.?

?Fine with me.?

?Good bye Heero.?

No response.

As she left he knew he should go to her and ask for forgiveness, but he didn?t. He sat there and let her walk out of his life forever. Forever only lasted 45 minutes and ended with a bullet.

~End~

Posted: **Mon Jul 21, 2003 4:56 pm**

Oh my Goddess... I need more explaination on the end!!

So sad!!

Great job!!

Posted: **Mon Jul 21, 2003 4:59 pm**

Ahhhhh!!!

Total angst! I couldn't have done it better. Man, i wasn't expecting the ending to end with such a...BANG. Pun intended. Great job! You're very good at this considering you got it under 90 words and managed to make it with such an impact. Nicely done!

Posted: **Mon Jul 21, 2003 5:29 pm**

Wow... that last sentence was... awesome. It was so powerful, yet so short. Wow.

Posted: **Mon Jul 21, 2003 9:03 pm**

I'm confused.... did he/she shoot her/him/herself/himself?

Augh. I feel so stupid.....

Posted: **Tue Jul 22, 2003 7:03 am**

He shot himself.

Blissful Ignorance

{Drabble Challenge #4} Forever

{Drabble Challenge #4} Forever