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Silence (drabble #4...again)

Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2003 9:29 am
by miaka mouse
arrrggghhhh raine!! these drabbles are so addicting!! ur so evil!! great idea MBF...

ok so since my last answer was all dialogue...here's one with no dialogue at all...

Silence

PG

1xR

word count: 100! (again! including title)

They stared at each other in terrifying silence, anger and indignation swirling in their eyes as they stood frozen in their glares. Relena's hand grazed the partially open door as Heero stayed firmly by the table. His eyes were steeled in obstinacy, a thin sheet barely masking his fears. Hers stayed a steady raging blue, her hand clenching around the doorknob hinting at her desperation.

Still, neither spoke.

Not until she walked out and slammed the door behind her, not until he hurled the lamp on the table at the mockingly closed door, did they finally break the silence.

Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2003 1:06 pm
by AngelOfDeath
Curse these things for being so confoundedly interesting! :D

Another good job.

Another wish to know why they were arguing....::sigh::

I guess a 100 words just isn't enough. That's why it's a challenge after all.

Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2003 4:09 pm
by Morrighan
Ooh... Great job!!!

Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2003 4:44 pm
by raine_yuy
Har har har!

Everyone's cursing me now, are they? Raine of the Carribean: Curse of the Drabble Challenge. Errr...har. Let's forget i ever mentioned that.

Wonderful descriptions of barely constrained violence and anger Miaka. Just left us hanging a little as to what the fight was about. *sigh* stupid 100 words.

Btw, nobody's stopping you from writing another. And another. And another. Har har.