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The News of Labor (Drabble Challenge #3)

Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2003 5:02 pm
by bookworm
Now here is my answer to Drabble Challenge #3. Again, the father is mentioned. And this is 100 words exactly. Same goes to the prequel.

The News of Labor
By: bookworm

Waggle of steps.

Stops and looks down.

A puddle of water.

?I?m in labor.?

A mass of feet shuffling ensued as people rushed toward the pregnant woman. Too concerned for the woman, no one heard the silent thud that occurred after the news.

Calmly led the people from crushing her down. Looks around for the father.

?Where?s Heero??

Frantic looks for the young man, who was unconscious on the floor. Finally the father was located and awakens.

?Couldn?t deal, huh??

Whack.

The famous phrase.

?Heero!?

A pause, and then a rush out the house toward the hospital.

?He deserved it.?

Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2003 5:36 pm
by Elyn Yuy
:eek: who got whacked?
:lol: great job book worm!

:salute: Elyn Yuy

Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2003 7:02 pm
by melrose_stormhaven
nice one, worm! I liked it, especially with Heero fainting.

Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2003 8:15 pm
by bookworm
Well, there is only ONE guy that I envisioned for Heero to punch. Let's see...he's definitely someone who gets on Heero's nerve...a lot. He's sympathetic for Heero, but being who he is, Heero doesn't take his sympathy the way it is given. Given that the guy is the best one for comedic interlude in any given fanfic, you can pretty guess who I'm talking about.

:wink: :wink: :wink: :wink: :wink:

Posted: Sun Jul 20, 2003 10:47 pm
by Morrighan
*laughs* Ooh... Good one!!!

Great job!!