Last Time (Drabble Challenge)
Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2003 8:56 am
I got bit by the Drabble bug! after reading the excellent entries by everyone else, I decided to try as well. 
I did a few X-Men:Evolution almost-drabbles (they were around 300 words each or something) and it was great fun. So i wanted to try again...
So, weighing in at 104 words (I think) is my humble entry to the Drabble Challenge, long may it live.
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Last Time
When did the state of normalcy, of non-pain, become such a far-off dream? When had she last taken a breath not surcharged with agony?
She couldn?t see well through the tears, everything a salty blur, but the dark blue of Heero?s eyes pierced through to hers. It was all his fault?all his?
She took his hand.
And then she squeezed, digging her nails into the back of his palm, feeling the bones underneath his skin shift.
?Never again! Do you hear me, Yuy?! This is the last time I ever sleep with you! Not worth it!?
?Relena-chan?(itai!)??
?LAST %*#(&*(@#&TIME!?
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?Waaaaaaaah!?
?Congratulations, it?s a boy!?
*owari*
....the soundtrack while I wrote this was an instrumental version of Balto from Xenogears. It's one of my favorite tracks. Random lang. ^_^
And this is based off a scene in my fic 'The Yuy Family', BTW.
I did a few X-Men:Evolution almost-drabbles (they were around 300 words each or something) and it was great fun. So i wanted to try again...So, weighing in at 104 words (I think) is my humble entry to the Drabble Challenge, long may it live.
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Last Time
When did the state of normalcy, of non-pain, become such a far-off dream? When had she last taken a breath not surcharged with agony?
She couldn?t see well through the tears, everything a salty blur, but the dark blue of Heero?s eyes pierced through to hers. It was all his fault?all his?
She took his hand.
And then she squeezed, digging her nails into the back of his palm, feeling the bones underneath his skin shift.
?Never again! Do you hear me, Yuy?! This is the last time I ever sleep with you! Not worth it!?
?Relena-chan?(itai!)??
?LAST %*#(&*(@#&TIME!?
***
?Waaaaaaaah!?
?Congratulations, it?s a boy!?
*owari*
....the soundtrack while I wrote this was an instrumental version of Balto from Xenogears. It's one of my favorite tracks. Random lang. ^_^
And this is based off a scene in my fic 'The Yuy Family', BTW.
Eeeeeee! That was so very cute! Omg! Awwwwww!