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Last Wish (drabble challenge response)

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 7:12 am
by maverickhunter
Everyone seems to be writing sad responses to this drabble challenge, so I thought I would write a happier one. First time writing, so go a little easy on me. Obviously, I don?t own any of the characters, etc, etc.

Title: Last Wish
Rating: G
Pairing: 1xR
Word count: 100

I look into your sky-blue eyes and see unconditional love. Not just love for the ex-assassin, but for the man I have become in his place.

Five years of restraint; constant denial of what's been there all along. All the looks, touches, and facial expressions. I had ignored them the whole time. What was I thinking all that time? So much of our lives - wasted because of my stupidity.

As I slip the gold ring on your finger, my only, and hopefully last, wish was that I had done this sooner.

?...I now pronounce you ? man and wife.?

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 11:20 am
by raine_yuy
awww...sweetie, that's so sappy and...and...well, sweet!

lol. everyone has been a little angsty as of late. i seriously don't knwo why. but great job for going against the trend and creating such a touching fluff piece. it really made me smile and agve me mushy little feelings. lol. see? look what you just made me write. well done hon!

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 1:36 pm
by AngelOfDeath
Heero should have done a lot of things sooner. :wink:

It was so melt-y happy. Hooray!

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 2:42 pm
by Nausica?

I agree with everyone - good for you for going against the trend.

Nicely written and what makes it better is that those two are getting married. Heck yeah, it was about time :D


- Naus

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:05 pm
by Kanya Barton
Awwww, how sweet! I love all the answers to this challenge so far! Gosh I wish I had the self-discipline to be able to do something like this! Argh...Oh well, I'll leave all that to you guys!
Peace out! :D

Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2003 5:33 pm
by Morrighan
KAWAII!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D Great job!!!