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Creepy little one shot that came out of no where

Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2003 4:24 am
by Shooting Gundam Star
I do not own Gundam Wing!

Bullets Don?t Discriminate


How can a bullet know what it?s hitting? How can it be told where to go? It could hit a baby girl as easily as it could hit someone?s lover. The bullets fly in fast waves leaving streaks of silver in their wake. They pierce one?s chest, heart, and lungs. They loge their way not only into your body but into your very soul. A happy ending can never end with a bullet. Just as a bullet can never bring a happy ending. All must die, but why mush some die in such a merciless way. If the bullet hits it target they may not die, but the pain will still live on inside them, the pain of the cold, lifeless, chuck of metal piercing their body. They must live with the nightmare of that instance forever. So why would someone fire a gun with the intention to kill? In self-defense? In rage or hate? Or as some may say out of love? No one can fire a bullet out of love. If a bullet is fired it has a reason. Some say that reason is love, I say no. No gun can be shot out of love. The bullet hit him. The bullet killed him. The bullet shot from love. No. No bullet can be shot with love. I tell myself this over and over, but is it true? Can a shot be fired with love or the intention of love? No, it?s not true. If the person who fired that shot had loved me, the shot would have never been fired. The shot hit my lover. The shot killed my lover. The shot could have killed me. The shot killed him instead. Bullets don?t discriminate.


1xR ? 292 words ? Death fic.
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Posted: Fri Jun 20, 2003 8:05 am
by zipdos
Hey there!!

I like this one shot. I find it poetic. Ok.....so it's bad that Heero got shot by a bullet but still. Nice job :D

Ciao!! :wink:

Posted: Sat Jun 21, 2003 12:51 am
by wicked
Read this on ff.net. Liked it there too. ^_^

Yes it is poetic in some sense. Very true throughout. Nice job.

~Wicked

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2003 1:52 am
by shadowcat
Its really sad and touching.
the only suggestion i could make is that you should space it out alittle. i got lost and end up reading the same line 4 times.

-Shadow

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2003 7:07 pm
by lilac310
Good Job!!! But hey..this could be one shot for 1xR fics but it can be a series for Alternative Pairings fan fictions!!!!! Care to try that? :wink: :wink: Keep it up!!!

Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2003 7:10 pm
by lilac310
Ok...let me get that clear......My first couple will 4 eva be Heero and Relena, ok??? 8) ...GEEEZZ.....just suggesting that u might wanna try alternate pairings.... :lol: :lol: