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Response to Challange: Seven Days

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2003 6:57 am
by Melville's Best Friend
Seven Days (Prologue)
Caliborn?s Challenge Response




It was evident to him that he had gone mad.

Totally, insanely, weird-guy-hidden-in-the-shadows-looking-at-you kind of mad.

But, he regressed. Had it not been for Quatre and his impish, nagging, pleading little voice, he would not find himself in this position.

But then?he could regress further.

Had he not been forewarned that SHE was to be there, he would not find himself in this position.


?Hey Heero! It?s Quatre!?

?What?s wrong??

?Nothing. I just wanted to know if you would-?

?No.?

?Relena will be there.?


And this was all it took.

Yet, he was on his way to them. On a bus in the middle of the Earth. Ready to stay with them for a week. Seven whole days.

He hated the thought of a reunion. Loathed it. Wanted to stick it in a Gundam and fly it into the sun. However, he and his ?ever-so-clever? self were headed down to the only reunion of which he could ever take part (high school never being an option).

In retrospect, he might be able to say he did the right thing. After all, he and his hypocritical self had followed less than few emotions in the past two years. Surely now was the time to produce a backbone and fall head over heels again.

Who was he kidding? Again?

He kept tabs. He watched her on the news; followed what she did online. She had a web page:

www.relenastheprincessofpeace.com

which he visited on a frequent basis. But this wasn?t the point. The point was?How was he going to explain this to his conscious who had yet to stop poking at him?

Then again?What was he going to say when he saw her? What would she say? And the most important question of all:

How many hours would pass before would be forced to kill Duo?

The bus driver smiled at him, nodding as they had reached the Winner mansion.

?Yeh gotcher self a pretty good friend, der, meester. If I?s you, I?d stay der fer de rest o? my days, tell ya what!?

Heero made no eye contact, but walked casually off the bus, duffle in one hand, a book in the other (Life?s Little Instruction Book), and a loaded gun in his pocket.

The main gate held a golden W on the front, and laced in between bars as if it were thread. He held a button while a camera whirred to him; checking him. He somehow knew who was in the control panel, and gave a curt finger and a smirk.

?Not funny.?

?Hn.?

?I didn?t think you were coming.?

?I?m here aren?t I??

?Yeah, I guess so. Hey! You?ll never guess who?s here!?

?Let me in, Duo.?

?Wow. Will she ever be pleased to see you!!!!?

He readied his gun. Obviously, he would have to kill Duo in less than five minutes.




Disclaimer: GW characters ain?t mine.


WHEW!!! I have made a prologue! *snickers* An idea came to me in the middle of the night, and I had to start writing?There should be seven main chapters (one for each day) and an epilogue.

I might forgo the epilogue if I feel it necessary. But I doubt it. ^_^

All right! I have started! *looks for the rest of the challenges* Come on, people!!! Get a move on!!!!!

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2003 7:09 am
by RyanEX2000
This was...............unusually fast,Mellie.

Didn't think you'd respond this fast.But don't think this will exscuse you from finishing It's a Kid Thing.

Kill Duo in less than five minutes :roll: .Well he lasted four minutes longer than I thought he would.

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2003 11:30 am
by Kiyoko
Yay, I'm so glad that someone took up the challenge! You are going to do such a great job, I'm really excited. Your work always makes me roll over laughing! Awsome job so far and I can't wait for the rest! :D

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2003 2:01 pm
by wicked
So she has her own web page huh? *smirks* Oh the insanity that will ensue is keeping me in suspense dear sister.

Too funny or at least I know that the next chapters will be too funny for words.

Funny...there's still only the prologue done. Where's the rest? Hm? Chop chop!!

~Wicked

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2003 2:18 pm
by aku_ryo
cool cool start, very much like it

wanna read more...

akuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 11:00 am
by Eden
I gotta agree with Ryan, . . . This came up really fast, and yes, you still have to finish It's a kid thing!!

Hopefully you'll post the rest of that before you get too deep in this one, although I think that this is gonna be a fun read. (It is so far!)

I like the book he's got their, "Lif's little Instruction book". Is that what he needs to survive the nightmare he's gotten himself into?! Can't wait to read more!!

~Eden

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 1:34 pm
by Litia-sama
You sure know how to make a good day into a totallyfreakingawesomecan'tstoptwitchingmusthavemore day.

But you probably already knew that.

*poke* come on *poke* hurry up *poke* I'm getting antsy.

~Litia

p.s. *poke*

Nifty!

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 9:24 pm
by Caliborn
Nice start! I'm loving it already. Heero looks like he's heading for a mental breakdown-- Poor guy. ^_^
And the most important question of all:

How many hours would pass before would be forced to kill Duo?
You know, somehow, Duo manages to weasle his way out of even the most serious death threats, while at the same time driving Heero even more off his rocker-- so to speak. ^_^ Continue soon?

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2003 10:54 pm
by Nausica?

:D Oh boy... I can feel an obsession coming on.

Thanks to you and your amazing writing talents, I'll be haunting the forums for weeks on end. It's bad enough with It's Time. Now I have to add this to the growing list as well.

:-P

Bring. It. On...

* muah *


- Naus

Posted: Sat Jun 14, 2003 3:07 am
by shadowcat
is that a real website???

i'm gonna try that one day....

hmmm...oh yes

great start mel!!!

can't wait for more
lets play the waiting game..................

-Shadow