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tornin1/2
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What I Am

Post by tornin1/2 »

Warning- this was just something i wrote to get relieve myself of the stress that people at school gave me. A friend of mine told me that writing helps to get rid of anger and sorrow, well i think it helps. :D . See i'm smiling now.

another warning is that this one's quite angsty, so if you're faint of heart or just don't like reading this type of poem, for your own good stay away, my friend, stay away.


I used to be a rose,
Beautiful both ways,
But someone came up to me,
And tore my petals away.
They scattered them on the ground,
And stamped all over it.
So now I'm gone,
Gone as gone can be.

Don't think i'm suicidal,
I really am not.
This may seem like rubbish,
But it's helping me.

You see I'm a rose.
One that's all torn inside.
I'm beautiful on the outside,
You don't want to know the inner me.

It's a beast that's trapped.
In this hateful world.
It wants to be free but can't get away.
It's tethered to my brain;
Locked up somewhere dark,
It needs to be forgotten,
Or it might just set a spark.
I'll go over the egde
One day because of it.
The damage that it'll wreak
Will destroy me!
Or maybe i've already been destroyed.
No wonder they seem to hate me.
I'm different to them.
I seem quiet.
But you wanna know the truth?
I'm a beast.
Locked up somewhere cold.
It needs to be set free.
I'm quiet on the outside,
But inside I'm just.....
Me.


A/N: just wanted to share it with you all.

tornin1/2
Last edited by tornin1/2 on Thu Jun 05, 2003 6:05 am, edited 2 times in total.
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

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Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
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Post by Julia »

awwwwww you cracked me up!
you should write a book: how to get rid of your anger by writting
I love it more more more!
Take care!!!
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Post by cHiMes »

thats nice tornin :wink: ...u neva showed it to me! but its better than mine...at least urs makes sence :(

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Post by tornin1/2 »

don't say that, i think your's are as good as mine, some are even better.
and don't think i'm saying that cos ur my best friend, cos u know i could be mean
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

Man does not weave this web of life. He is merely a strand of it.
Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
-Chief Seattle (1786-1866)

"God will not look your over for medals,
degrees or diplomas, but for scars."
-Elbert Hubbard

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Post by cHiMes »

liar....
"When I was suffering, you were there behind me" Anon....unless i made it up...

"If she dies, the World Nation and this false peace will disappear. Relena, I'll destroy you."

"Zero won't tell me. Wufei, tell me, how many more times do I have to kill that girl and her dog? Tell me, Wufei." [Heero]

You can find me on Gaia online as Melicent....
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Post by tornin1/2 »

i'm telling the truth
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

Man does not weave this web of life. He is merely a strand of it.
Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
-Chief Seattle (1786-1866)

"God will not look your over for medals,
degrees or diplomas, but for scars."
-Elbert Hubbard

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Post by Shooting Gundam Star »

Verry pretty. In a way is depic's life. You live, you die, you are scattered. Once again, very pretty.

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Post by Lara Winner »

Poetry is the best way to vent. You should read some of the dark stuff I write. I can honestly say everyone has felt this way at some point. And anger and pain is like that, it festers and eats at you if you don't find a way to release it. Excellent poem! :salute:
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Post by tornin1/2 »

thanks! and what you said is so true.
torn
"Colony no heiwa no tame dattara, yorokonde shinigami ni naru ze!" - For the peace of the colonies, I will gladly become the God of Death." Duo

Man does not weave this web of life. He is merely a strand of it.
Whatever he does to the web, he does to himself."
-Chief Seattle (1786-1866)

"God will not look your over for medals,
degrees or diplomas, but for scars."
-Elbert Hubbard

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Post by Morrighan »

I totally agree with Lara. When people are in times of great emotional turmoil (i.e. relationship problems, school), one of the greatest things to do is to vent it out through writing, whether it be a fic, a story, a poem. It really doesn't matter, just as long as it comes out.

Heh-heh. You guys have just given me the idea to post more of my poems up.... :D

This is wonderfully expressive!! I've felt the same way before!!!
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