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[poem] While You Were Sleeping

Posted: Mon May 05, 2003 11:22 pm
by Beck
I'm still working on getting a few more of my older fics posted here.


Disclaimer: Don't own them and never will. Nuff said. This can be taken as Heero's view while thinking of Relena.




I've watched you lying there in shadows
Caressing the contours of your face.


Light recedes at more defined angles
Bending your brow to a sigh
Reflecting your innocent smile.


Why did you wake me to your dreams?


I did not need to see
I will not make believe its truth.


Can you hear me?


ANSWER ME!


And there will be no more secrets
I have watched you sleep with eyes closed
Wanting so badly to kiss you.


But you answer me with darkness and dreams
While I keep my vigil.


Could I embrace this darkness
And release my fears?


Fall asleep in your arms...
Would you wake in my dreams?


HELP ME!


I know you hear me
Confess in silence
My desires...


Lying in shadows
Caressing the contours of your face...
I tell myself it is...


Just a dream.



:D

Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2003 9:46 pm
by Shooting Gundam Star
WOW! That was so good. You really have a talent for potrey. :D

OOh..

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2003 11:39 am
by Kasiree
Thats good. You have a talent for poetry writing. :D

Posted: Sat Oct 25, 2003 8:14 pm
by Wingnut
Yowsa! That is good.
Accually it could go both ways, Heero to Relena or Relena to Heero.

Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2004 2:56 pm
by Raspberry
*sigh*

So beautiful...

I agree with others - you DO have a talent for poetry :D

Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2004 6:11 pm
by Mellie
very well done! Emotional, riveting, thought proveoking! Excellent job, more poetry please!