Lingering (Series) Rated NC-17

Post by **blackrose** » Fri Feb 21, 2003 9:01 pm

Lingering consciousness, her taste lingering on his lips. The Zero system was the ultimate weapon, but the pilot paid a terrible price: his sanity.

Anguish dug into his chest, throbbing like an infected wound. Contaminated agents wound their way through the smallest capillaries, spreading disease to every cell, nourishing his body with promised death. Rage frothed on his skin like grimy puss.

?NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!?

He sliced and cut, his entire core thrown into metallic confines of the suit. Zero responded fluently, tearing flesh and crunching metal in a frenzied pace set by the desolate pilot nestled inside. Fervent battle raged as space erupted into the physical, fiery incarnation of hell.

War was hell, and Zero the forever agony of a tortured soul.

?Give me the controls, and I can take away your nightmares??

?No.?

?I can end your pain??

?I can?t tell what?s ? I can?t see?what?s REAL anymore!?

shadowcat · Post by **shadowcat** » Wed Mar 05, 2003 2:04 am

Very very very very very well written!!!!!!!

It's like a beautiful retell of the whole series!!!!
what an amazing story, beautifully written and it was just amazing,i just can't describe it

Shadowcat

zapenstap · Post by **zapenstap** » Tue Nov 11, 2003 5:05 am

Rose, did i ever tell you i love this? I can't remember if i have, but i do. It incorporates images from the series so beautifully and is so intensely written. I really really love it. I ought to be able to say more in praise of it, but it's 3 am and my brain is fried. i had a rough day. Anyway, it's gorgeous.

melrose_stormhaven · Post by **melrose_stormhaven** » Tue Nov 11, 2003 5:56 am

beautiful...as always!

Wingnut · Post by **Wingnut** » Wed Nov 12, 2003 10:12 pm

So he finally broke free from the Zero system in the end after all. Good, that system can be more trouble than it is worth. It also seems to be a bit of a hentai. Either it or Heero is when it comes to Relena.

Andrea · Post by **Andrea** » Tue Dec 16, 2003 1:11 am

This was the first story I read from you... and I just felt the urge to read it again... So beautiful, and deep.

Oyuki · Post by **Oyuki** » Mon Dec 22, 2003 5:15 pm

aah! i've always loved this! his emotions are so deep! he suffers so damn much! this is so good!

Chibi-sitter · Post by **Chibi-sitter** » Sun Mar 21, 2004 4:00 pm

I like the way you gave Wing Zero & Epyon character, though I'll never look at em the same way again

and as always I love the way you write Heero

Raspberry · Post by **Raspberry** » Fri Apr 09, 2004 1:14 pm

Beautiful. Just beautiful. Heero IS sensitive, and you made it clear. Very well written. Great job!

Cinthya_Dee · Post by **Cinthya_Dee** » Wed Aug 18, 2004 12:26 pm

Wow!!!!! that was intense. You described Heeros feelings exceptionally well. The metaphors you used were great. I wish there was more writen but it is fine the way it is. you had me lost at first but then I understood. Great Story.

Cinthya_Dee

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