Blissful Ignorance

Yeah Another Chapter... and I like. GO DOROTHY! thanks for adding her. She's like the voice of reason for Relena most of the time. I think really of Dorothy and Relena as two people, the realistic and the dreamer. I still love this chapter though

Someone shoot that damned Dorothy!!! Anyways, wow.. its a wonder that Heero hasnt pulled out the old self-detonation trick on us after that night. As for Relena... looks like she has something a little kinky popping up in her mind.
-Heero- "I'll kill....
-Relena- *Totally topless*

"MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!" -Stellar Soldier

2nd read through status:

Yes, Dorothy must die. She is a threat to the mission status: keep the Americas from being another Chernobyl. Additional suspicion of her working with terrorist organization, as she seems to know every step of the current mission plan currently taken to as of late.

Relena.... *sigh* once more manipulated 'slightly' by Dorothy's sinister, yet innocent demeanor. How did she get to be a politician again? Omit previous comment.

Heero, watch your back. Mission potentially snafu'ed. Expect ambush in bedroom. No current details on 'attacker' or what 'weapons' he/she may be armed with.

Duo... don't play the psychologist position with Heero, its just not safe.

Rest of the GW team, "DAMN MAN!!!!! GOTTA LOOK AFTER YOUR OWN!!!DUO BE DOING ALL THE WORK!!!!"

(PS: Zechs... being a fighter and a lover are two different things.)

-Stellar Soldier (In character) :x

Contrary to what people started posting after reading this chapter, I think adding Dorothy to the mix was brilliant. I can't wait to see how this turns out. It has me checking BI every day for a new chapter. Keep them coming! I love it!

Man.. Dorothy was so harsh. Even if she supposedly helped Relena from not getting too "attached," she seemed to enjoy crushing Relena. This is a VERY complex story, and I'm looking forward to reading the next installment.

Poor Heero. This isn't an easy "mission," and the fact that he's very conflicted and confused about what is going on actually speaks rather well for Relena. If she was someone else, it would have been far easier for him.

Keep up the good work!

-- Moira

Still though, DOROTHY MUST DIE!!!!! She's a pest! Her presence around Relena threatens the success of the mission. As if Heero being ordered to have sex with Relena was hard enough on him, he doesnt need Dorothy planting doubt in Relena's mind about Heero. But, it does make for a good story though. (PS: If I were in the same room with Dorothy, there would be mad eyebrow plucking right about now. :evil: )

The Stellar Soldier :x

DON'T DO IT RELENA!!
Revenge will only complicate things now that Heero has started to show Duo some of his frustration in wrestling his feelings!! *the irony*

Aw, man, now DOROTHY'S in this?? Zechs' better half, probably. She's right in character, gently rusing Relena.

zapenstap wrote:?Hey, man, you okay??

Heero didn?t respond vocally, but he shot Duo a cold blue glare from beneath his hair. Duo wondered if maybe he hadn?t noticed his approach. That was very unusual. Duo tried to puzzle out what could be bothering the other pilot so much, but he didn?t feel very talented at reading Heero?s emotions. The only thing he knew that would ever put Heero on the edge of depression was a failed mission. Except, his mission in this case was to love Relena as her husband?sort of. Did that mean that?? ?Say, buddy,? his casual laugh came out partially choked. ?You aren?t concerned about the?uh, mission or anything? are you??

Need I say more? Perfectly written! And Heero was a bit overprotective when he quizzed Duo on how much he saw (poor Duo barely had the air to answer) and then he APOLOGIZED to Duo...something's definitely up with Yuy~he didn't exactly ask for advice, but is showing obvious signs of needing assistance to understand what's going on...*shrugs* its a start

Zapenstap/miyaza, NICE including Duo's point of view to highlight some of Heero's thoughts more clearly for the reader

Now...just to replace Duo's insight with Relena's...before she does something brash!

~Man, everyone at Preventer's Headquarters is gonna get it. I can just see Relena, pointedly using her politicians ease to set everyone straight, using a little force with Zechs and then the Headquarters dissipating in a swirl of ominous black clouds...
And Relena has every right to be upset-it's one thing to have Cole, the Mole and surveillance by ONE uniformed Preventor, but to have such an audience is just cruel~of course, on top of it all being an order...ouch

Hmmm, Relena really deserves a day off Poor gurl

miz_lou: Come on over, Relena, and we'll have a good cry...I've had a lousy week too
Relena: I'm much too busy scheming at the moment
miz_lou: *sweatdrop* *nudges Duo* You'd better go warn the others

Man, the complication continues with Dorothy! Shoot...

NEXT CHAPTER~aren't you excited? You'll be getting another one of my LONG , involved reviews

~miz_lou