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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 9:31 am
by rain2cry
Wow...I found it disturbing at first---especially what happened to Relena. The way you wrote that scene was just...wow. Could she even survive from something like THAT?
Well, the ending was nice. Had a softer feel compared to everything else.
Good job.
Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 1:39 pm
by so_so_sad
A beautiful story about a horrible thing, I agree, a sequel is in order. And don?t mind me here, but could a human being really survive that. I mean it was very descriptive about really hacking away at the insides of a female body. It just sounds like the conditions they were in wouldn't let Relena survive after she was carved up like that. However I admire your work. You have the ability to freeze a persons thought and consume them with your own.
Posted: Thu Oct 18, 2007 10:37 pm
by Queen Scorpio
....WOW....I am in shock. That was so amazingly written and so intense. I could see it happening and the way you wrote it made it possible to feel emotions connected to the fic itself. And the part about their child was so uplifting. Beautiful job!
Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2008 12:40 am
by hhryah
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*gapes*
Wow. WOW.
Your writing.
So angsty.
So amazing.
So angistly amazing.
*is reduced to utter incoherence at something to heart-wrenching beautiful in such a twisted way*