Ack! Milliardo! ^_^_^_^_^* (I can die happy now...)
Oh yes, things are getting very interesting, but hell, this story of yours has gotten me hooked since the first chapter. Great job, Wicked, awesome writing.
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That's was rather...uh...interesting. Love it...and more, please.
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?We are only human, and the gods have fashioned us for love. That is our great glory, and our great tragedy.? ? Maester Aemon of The Night's Watch, A Song of Ice and Fire
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Ennis Tremellyn, Director of CIA in The Man.
?We are only human, and the gods have fashioned us for love. That is our great glory, and our great tragedy.? ? Maester Aemon of The Night's Watch, A Song of Ice and Fire
"There are easier ways to die; this is NOT one of them!"
For ALL your anime/game sountrack needs: http://gh.ffshrine.org?r=23263
Avatar is from the Naruto Shippuden trailer, made by farlist in LJ.
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I finally got around to reading this. Thanks for assuring me of the future Heero/Relena... it's just too intense for me, I thought about bailing.
I don't like Heero and Relena (permanently... or mainly at all) with other people, so I know I should never read alts (that's why I'm never seen in the alt. forum... I'm a canon supporter
). You've written this so well that you've made me sympathize with Wufei and scorn Relena... but I still feel like I have to jump ship, because of all the Wufei/Relena moments. It's amazing that you can twist my emotions so much. That hasn't happened to me in a while. I'm not scolding you; I'm trying to give you a compliment, but it's not coming out very well.
Great job, and remember: *wags finger* this is in the 1xR forum... so more 1xR, or I must borrow one of Rose's weapons to whip you.
Keep going!!!!
~Tomorrow
I finally got around to reading this. Thanks for assuring me of the future Heero/Relena... it's just too intense for me, I thought about bailing.

I don't like Heero and Relena (permanently... or mainly at all) with other people, so I know I should never read alts (that's why I'm never seen in the alt. forum... I'm a canon supporter


Great job, and remember: *wags finger* this is in the 1xR forum... so more 1xR, or I must borrow one of Rose's weapons to whip you.

Keep going!!!!

~Tomorrow
The Importance of Tomorrow:
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
I'm with you 100%, just check the sig.Tomorrow wrote:::Wipes sweat from forehead::
I finally got around to reading this. Thanks for assuring me of the future Heero/Relena... it's just too intense for me, I thought about bailing.![]()
I don't like Heero and Relena (permanently... or mainly at all) with other people, so I know I should never read alts (that's why I'm never seen in the alt. forum... I'm a canon supporter). You've written this so well that you've made me sympathize with Wufei and scorn Relena... but I still feel like I have to jump ship, because of all the Wufei/Relena moments. It's amazing that you can twist my emotions so much. That hasn't happened to me in a while. I'm not scolding you; I'm trying to give you a compliment, but it's not coming out very well.
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Great job, and remember: *wags finger* this is in the 1xR forum... so more 1xR, or I must borrow one of Rose's weapons to whip you.![]()
Keep going!!!!![]()
~Tomorrow
Anyway if this does violate the 1xR protocall, the suthor will find themselves on the wrong end of the combined gun from the GAT-X103 Buster Gundam.
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Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.
The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.
Romance fanfic rule #1: Canon couples always take priority over all others.
The three most hated words in all of television... To Be Continued.
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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
*looks*
wicked, you are such a good writer. ^__^ I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner! I thought I had read it and replied but, NO! I must have had to go to work and tried to remember to come back...
My appologies.
Relena loves Heero and Heero loves Relena, and the two will make haooy all night long. Of this, I've no doubt.
What a wonderful chapter. The tone and setting for this chapter was perfect, and you're getting into the emotions of the characters more. It's frustrating to know how Wuffles feels...but the art here is...you've conveyed that well in your writing. I could just glomp you!!!
We can all understand where Lena's coming from, and how easy it is for someone to turn toward her strength and want to hump it...and...what is so wonderful about this story is...
You made her love Wufie for the same reasons she loves Heero.
Heero: I'm indefinately more handsome.
Relena: True.
Heero: And I'm a better pilot.
Relena: You're also a biger idiot.
Great job, sis! I can't wait to read more!!!!
Heart,
the MBF
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wicked, you are such a good writer. ^__^ I'm sorry I didn't get to this sooner! I thought I had read it and replied but, NO! I must have had to go to work and tried to remember to come back...
My appologies.
Relena loves Heero and Heero loves Relena, and the two will make haooy all night long. Of this, I've no doubt.
What a wonderful chapter. The tone and setting for this chapter was perfect, and you're getting into the emotions of the characters more. It's frustrating to know how Wuffles feels...but the art here is...you've conveyed that well in your writing. I could just glomp you!!!
We can all understand where Lena's coming from, and how easy it is for someone to turn toward her strength and want to hump it...and...what is so wonderful about this story is...
You made her love Wufie for the same reasons she loves Heero.
Heero: I'm indefinately more handsome.
Relena: True.
Heero: And I'm a better pilot.
Relena: You're also a biger idiot.

Great job, sis! I can't wait to read more!!!!
Heart,
the MBF
Bob is my avatar. wicked made it for me. She is basically to-the-limit. Except she's bereft. And that is so sad.
Drop it. Like it is hot.
Drop it. Like it is hot.