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Posted: Tue Dec 23, 2003 3:43 pm
by Oyuki
Oh me like! me like a lot! yes, yes!
Posted: Fri Dec 26, 2003 11:19 pm
by Wingnut
Beck wrote:
"She doesn't want any!" He growled out, rather loudly.
*holds sides from laughing* Ya know, when you think about it, I could really see Heero saying that. Considering waiting this long only to have someone interupt you, how would they expect him to be?
Lovely lemon, made me smile alot. I think the way you handled the scene was a nice different approach. You more less expressed their feelings during the moment instead of the action itself. I mean you knew what they were doing w/out having to go into full blown detail. I like lemons either way cause I must say that I try not to give too much details but if it happens, it happens, I can't change my writing style.
Great end to a lovely fic and what a brave man Heero is for waiting this long.
Really. I've waited 3 years damn it, dinner isn't going to stop me now.
As for the lemon style, I'd say it is letting the emotions describe the actions, where yours, Beck, let the actions describe the emotions.
Either way I love them.
I like Heero's responce to Relena's happy ending question.
No, my dear Relena, it has only begun.
Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2004 4:30 pm
by Katisha888
I loved that last sentence about Relena...being endless. Intentional or not, it reminds me of the title itself of Endless Waltz.
Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2004 12:37 pm
by Numena
Whoa. I have no idea how in the world I missed this last chapter for so long! Eep!
It was wonderful, I loved it! And I agree;
I loved that last sentence about Relena...being endless. Intentional or not, it reminds me of the title itself of Endless Waltz.
That's what I was thinking when I read it..Very cool!
Posted: Fri Jun 11, 2004 10:28 am
by sweet_me_beajai
wow! i finally found the 3rd chapter!!
you can really feel Heero's pent-up passion!
its great how he's willing to faithfully control his desire and feelings so he won't jeopardize Relena's career! he's willing to wait *sigh*! unlike some fic that Relena is usually the one who does the waiting!!!
totally brill! congratulations and keep it up!!
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2005 11:25 pm
by KageOkami-Kogo
Funny and sweet
Although I, personally, would have made the lemon longer and with more detail... as you can clearly see in my 2 lemon oneshots "Dominance" and "The Simulator" LOL anywho, keep it up you're really good at this!!