Caveat Emptor - Chapter V
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Stella! *glomps* I'm so pleased you enjoyed the chapter. Long time in coming that it was. Thanks as always, for taking the time to leave such a nice review. *hugs*Stella wrote: Another chapter well worth the wait, Mel! I loved Heero and Relena's moment under the stars - the whole chapter was great, though ^_^ I can't wait to see what the next one will bring, what with Noin's arrival and all...
*huggles stefy* You really are wonderful stefy, you know that? It means alot to me that you are still enjoying this story, particularly with all the help you have given me with it. I couldn't be doing it without you, or Darkwing, so thank you so much. *glomps*stefy wrote: And the romance between Duo and Hildie was so beautiful.. but poor Hildie
It's so sad that they have had so little time to enjoy their union
Anyway I hope that Rel will follow Hildie very good advice.
*grins* Couldn't help yourself could you?stefy wrote: btw, when the next chapter?
Soon, stefy, soon.Thanks guys!
Love Mel
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Thank you Kiyoko! Well... I can certainly promise alot more 1xR action in chapter six... so I hope you'll continue to follow along.kiyoko wrote: wow this story is so awsome! I'm on the edge of my seat here! Aw I can't wait for some more heero and relena action. I'll be waiting and keep up the good work.
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OMG--MEL! 
*deep composing breath* First off, BRAVO! *throws confetti* I am soooooo impressed with this-even though, I did catch a few peeks of it out at Stella's when we visited. But now, reading it in its finished form...WOW! I am absolutely speechless! This was soooo worth the wait!
Your scenes are set with such an air of clarity, that reading it, I felt like I was sitting there watching it unfold. The scene between Heero and Relena *drooool* was so perfect that I'm STILL sighing. Probably will be for days!
Love, lust, call it what you will- HE'S HOT! Relena is WAY more restrained than I would be, let me just say that!
And the bond between Hilde and Duo, and the way she explained it, actually had me in tears. I wish I had a little Hilde plushie, because I would have been squeezing her, too! How tragic!
I cannot wait to see where you take this next!
Until then, revel in your victory of this chapter, hon, you have earned it!
*hugs and big smootchies*
Luv
*deep composing breath* First off, BRAVO! *throws confetti* I am soooooo impressed with this-even though, I did catch a few peeks of it out at Stella's when we visited. But now, reading it in its finished form...WOW! I am absolutely speechless! This was soooo worth the wait!
Your scenes are set with such an air of clarity, that reading it, I felt like I was sitting there watching it unfold. The scene between Heero and Relena *drooool* was so perfect that I'm STILL sighing. Probably will be for days!
Love, lust, call it what you will- HE'S HOT! Relena is WAY more restrained than I would be, let me just say that!And the bond between Hilde and Duo, and the way she explained it, actually had me in tears. I wish I had a little Hilde plushie, because I would have been squeezing her, too! How tragic!
I cannot wait to see where you take this next!
Until then, revel in your victory of this chapter, hon, you have earned it!
*hugs and big smootchies*
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LoL. Thanks melrose! A short but VERY effective review. I'm so pleased you thought so. More to come soon, so I hope you'll keep reading along.melrose_stormhaven wrote: Dang...beautiful...dang it...
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*glomps* Spookyboo! I know I said this last time, but I really must say it again... Your reviews always make my day! I'm grinning from ear to ear.luvspook wrote: *deep composing breath* First off, BRAVO! *throws confetti* I am soooooo impressed with this
I'm really glad you think so... especially since I teased you with that scene how long ago? LoL.luvspook wrote: even though, I did catch a few peeks of it out at Stella's when we visited. But now, reading it in its finished form...WOW! I am absolutely speechless! This was soooo worth the wait!
*snickers* Ah yes... Relena does have alot more self control than either of us I believe. Teehee. And yes... Love, Lust.... Tomato, Tomatoluvspook wrote: Love, lust, call it what you will- HE'S HOT! Relena is WAY more restrained than I would be, let me just say that!
Ah yes...luvspook wrote: And the bond between Hilde and Duo, and the way she explained it, actually had me in tears. I wish I had a little Hilde plushie, because I would have been squeezing her, too! How tragic!
Poor Hilde. But all is not lost... she will find love again... maybe... who with is anyone's guess *evil grin*Thanks so much Luvvy! It means alot to know you're still enjoying. *huggles* And I hope to see you online again sometime soon! I miss our indepth conversations
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Fantastic! Go mel, go mel, it's your birthday...no, just kidding. Excuse my silliness: I'm certifiably sleep-deprived. I couldn't go to bed til I'd finished this. Love it so far. Ooooh, Zechs is gonna get so whipped...
Please hurry with the next chappie.
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