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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:10 am
by Andrea
<i>Vos es mei</i> means 'You are mine.'

God, Mel! I was fanning myself the entire time! This was.... *drops dead*

I liked your word choice, your descriptive nature, the alluring way you wovewords and emotions so tight it allowed the story to flow in a seamless, smooth way.

Loved it. So sinfully beautiful.

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 1:46 pm
by perfectpeach
http://i50.photobucket.com/albums/f339/ ... le0035.jpg

this is the fanart mel. i saw it when i was in year 7. like 6 years ago. :pale: i had to borrow my freind's photocopy and scan it to find it.

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 1:54 pm
by HiFreak
One-shot with two parts??o_0
Oh well guess it ends here. But if you ever feel like continuing(sp?) feel free to do so.

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 5:54 pm
by melrose_stormhaven
Andrea! *glomp* Thankies!

Ah, at least I got the translation right! I was biting my nails, hoping I didn't bungle it.

Thanks for the fanart, peach!

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 6:06 pm
by takisha16
LOVE IT!
The lemon was good!
Everything just fit to perfection!
Please continue!

Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 7:48 pm
by Sai Hikaru
heehee how Heero got his name was kinda corny!!! :razz: but realli, u can't stop here :evil: more lemoness plz!!!! :lol: the nxt prt or sequel is comin out soon?!!??! rite!?!??!!??! *_*

Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 8:32 pm
by RelenaDorlinYuy1
* Fan her really fast self * YOU have no ideal how you made my heart freaking stop for a sec then it started to beat faster and Faster when i was reading this OMG MEL this is HOTT !!! i amost wet my self *blushed *

Geez i need a drink after reading that phew ! nice very nice

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 12:13 am
by lilac310
WOW....this is awesome...was that really it?....lol..oh well...great job, though

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:12 am
by melrose_stormhaven
Thankies again! XD

As I've said before, yes, this was meant to be a one-shot. And yes, I am an evil, evil person for doing this.

But wait, that doesn't mean I've given up on the story. I could probably write some more smut with daemon!Heero and Relena, but it won't strictly be on a chapter by chapter basis, more likely just snippets of how they're progressing.

(and yes, they will all be smut: lemon or lime :oops: )

Start suggesting places and positions, people. :wink:

Posted: Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:24 am
by Kari
That would be excellent. Hmm Positions * taps chin* I'll leave that up to you :lol: :roll: :wink: