Blissful Ignorance

This was great and all... impressively realistic but HEERO CHEATED ON HEEERRR!!! how the hell can she forgive him so easily!? although I don't really think she forgave him... just me babbling. Guess people do many odd things when they're in love (Relena. What Heero did wasn't odd, it was plain stupid.)

Anyways, excellent writing, Shevey, hands down...



Andrea.

THis is ssssooooo GREAT!!!!! ..hmmm..just wondering who the other woman was... ...???

i really enjoyed reading this.
It is really realistic. I loved every bit of it, even though he cheated on her but it was written so beautifully that it made uo for it.
Please keep writting
-Shadow

Gee I dunno shevster...This has to be my all time favorite fic or yours. I've spent all night reading your fanfics and this one takes a cake....I love how you write "Life" you know? It's almost creepy how realisitc you seem sometimes. Come on girl, branch out to the fantasy for once! Just kidding. Then it just wouldn't be shevey then would it?

Never stop writing. I love your style. It's very different and captivating.

miss violet

I agree with TigerQueen. ~_^ This is definitely publishable work.

I felt like I was actually there whilst reading this...You portrayed their emotions so beautifully. Dialogue and description was just damn near perfect. Over-looking the typos, I'd say this gets an A++. ^^ Maybe higher.

Whoo...Don't know why I feel so breathless reading this. ^^ Take that as a good sign, though.

Heero >.> I can't believe meh Heero did that! Oh, well--I'm sure if you continue this it could...be to where Relena forgives him? And they make up? Not saying they live happily ever after--yet. With some more development on them, it'd make an EXCELLENT sequel/part two if you come out with one/decide to continue this one.

Relena. ^^ She loves Heero so much. That's good--God, she'd freakin' die if he wanted to kill her, I mean, we all witness that ourselves in the series, eh? ^^ *Squeals* I love Heero and Relena. And this fanfic just portrays them SO well...Okay, now I know I'm repeating myself! Hah! XD Well, continue this oneeeee someday soon!

:evil: oh no heero y did u do that hey is that all.. no!

very realistic. i enjoyed it very much, with its considerable amount of angst and truth. my own parents had to deal with a similar situation (although, to this day, they still think i'm oblivious to it -- hah!), yet they stayed together... I also really admire Relena in this piece; with her forgiving nature and whatnot. good job.

Well written. Filled with emotion and the story wanders through intuitively.

Hmm... Though the story is very well written and beautiful, now I think I didn't want to read it... Sorry