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The Elelmental Paladin
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^_^ Cool i got a vote. thanks Cali.now get back to studing.
Avater props go to Caliborn, Thanks Cali!!!!!
OUT OF MY MIND PLEASE LEAVE A MESSAGE!!!!!
*_* I'm a pyro, just ask anyone in Club Beer! 8)

In my opinion, everyone in The Man NEEDS to have a quote from their charactor. 8)
?You?re all against me,? he accused, ?And I never did anything to deserve it.?

A Quote From The Man's Agent Paladin.

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Morrighan wrote:Wow, girl.... Intense stuff! ^_^

Now, I need to revisit that LJ entry.... :D :D
Thanks! 8)

I put it under memories... It's the only update I put under there, so it's easy to find for easier reference in the future. :)
8) 50 days til <s>I leave for Florida</s> FREEDOM! Image

I have been crowned the Queen of Ghetto Foods.

Puppy used all my mind soap. I apologize... :lol:

The best typo EVAH: ?Circe, I can?t stay in her much longer! It?s hot...!? Epyon called.

Bubby to Morri: Man! You're way out of my league!

"I think he's hormonal." - Morri

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Caliborn wrote:Oh my goodness. That was really well written! I can't wait until you put out the next part, really. I'm hooked!
8) Thanks!

I think I'll be making these chapters shorter than my usual chapter lengths because I think I wanna use this story for my Creative Writing Class. That means a lot of chapters, but more frequent updates. :wink:
Caliborn wrote:It was very intense... I love your skill with describing characters. I feel like I got a very good feel of each character's personality and traits. I was wincing for Wicked and glaring at Wolfe, and then exhaulting when, apparently, something went wrong for the bad guy. I think I like Wolfe's character though-- he's evil to the extreme (I loved the line, "I?d give you the option to nobly save them by answering a few simple questions for me, but I really want to do this." I think it summed up his character rather well-- from what I've seen so far, anyway. ^_^) but interesting nonetheless. Who was the other guy?
Thank you; I spent a little while on each character and outlined the details about them in a new approach since they are my creations. 8) I'm glad it came out rather well.

I love really evil characters. I took certain measures to illustrate who he is; for instance, he doesn't walk - he strides. Of course, the problem becomes the man; how do I make someone more evil than Wolfe?? :eek:

As for the other man, he doesn't have a name yet, but he will be a "Main Minion," so we'll be seeing him again. I left his name open for a variety of reasons, including for anyone who might be interested in taking up his character. :salute:
Caliborn wrote:Like Morri, I think I'm gonna go look at the LJ entry again. ^_^ As for code-names... um. Does my character have a certain job within the agency, or traits? If I knew a little more about how you were going to write her, I could give you a decent code name. ^_^
:-? Well, actually, I was kind of waiting on your code names to figure part of that out. :lol: But here's what I've got in a corroboration from the dream and my conscious decisions:

Cali - You're going to be the on-site computer technical person. ^_^ You were always with your laptop in the dream, so basically, you're a totally aweome hacker. 8) You rarely stay behind at a safe location to give the others tactical information about layout always wanting to be on-site to hack the compies. Definately not afraid to use your gun, but not exactly pleased about it. :lol:
Morri - For all intensive purposes, you were the leader. However, throughout the dream, we all took turns being the leader, so it was a shared position. :lol: So you're going to be the person with the last say. :salute: You'll also be the biggest problem solver. "What does this mean?" And in the dream, you weren't opposed to using forceful means of persuasion. You can decide if you want to keep that or not. :wink:
Ali - You were adamantly opposed to any force being used. - Not that I remember any interrogations from the dream, but it was like a known fact. :lol: You were the high-tech person. You always had some gadget that could help us, and I've no idea if you invented them or not. :lol: Your preferance was to take care of your problems with your pistol, and you had a particular affinity for sniper rifles... :lol:
Jackie - I was the enforcer. Uh... If we needed "forceful pursuasions," I was the one that did it. :-? I did a lot of the thinking with Morri. I prefered the physical approach, often taking enemies on in close combat. I had a gun, but I didn't often use it.
Caliborn wrote:...And by the way, I LOVED IT. I shall be poking you for more. :wink:
Well, hold off for a little while. :wink: I've got a lot to catch up on in other fics... :lol:

By the way, the setting is changing from Texas to California because it makes more sense that way. So all y'all Californians, you better inform me about California beaches as I've never been to one... 8)
8) 50 days til <s>I leave for Florida</s> FREEDOM! Image

I have been crowned the Queen of Ghetto Foods.

Puppy used all my mind soap. I apologize... :lol:

The best typo EVAH: ?Circe, I can?t stay in her much longer! It?s hot...!? Epyon called.

Bubby to Morri: Man! You're way out of my league!

"I think he's hormonal." - Morri

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:lol: Now, that really does sound like me in real life.... ^^;; Except for the forceful persuasion part... :lol:
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench. :-P

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wicked wrote:That's right bitches, I'm just that fucking awesome! I'm a top agent. I'm so top not even the ultimate seme could best me! I'm so awesome and top that I...got caught. *hangs head*
:lol: Actually, I haven't figured out how that happened... I mean, aside from the fact that Wolfe is really good, and it was him you were spying on... :lol:
wicked wrote:Oh I don't mind the torture. I didn't break...yet, so I'm all good. ~_^ Although will 48 hours be long enough for "me" to recuperate from 39 hours of torture? Unless they have some super uber medicinal power.
:lol: Well, it wasn't 39 hours straight. I doubt your broken ankle will be better, but everything else was pretty much "superficial" wounds. ^_^
wicked wrote:I too have had dreams akin to where this story originated. I've not had the opportunity to write them down or type up (can one ever type down?) but I give you serious credit for making it into an actual story. Rock on Freak Boy supporter!
:salute:

Dreams are so awesome. ^_^ If you've got some epics, I'd love to read them. ^_^
wicked wrote:Was there anything you wanted from me in order to write the other me? <s>Oh and can I eventually have smex with one seriously hot bad guy? And not die. That'd be good too. Liking the whole living thing. ~_^</s>
:-? I don't write those scenes... :lol: However, I wouldn't mind adding a little playful flirtation between the two, if you'd like. :) And I could do something at the end... I'll just say that the phrase "2 on 2" will be taken litteraly at the end. :wink:

Other than that, I don't think I need anything from you for the other "you." ^_^
wicked wrote:I too like Wolfe so far. Dude has balls to do what he did and make some of us like him. Because that's what you want in a bad guy, "Sure I'd offer to let you save these guinnea pigs but you know what? I really just want to kill them like whoa. Here goes! Party time!"

And I have this image of Allen being kinda like panty waste or at least picked on by his comrades. "Allen wants to be known as Phantom. Ha ha! You gonna wear the purple jumpsuit too big guy? Bwahahaha!" Poor thing.
8) I'm lovin' Wolfe. :lol: - Regardless of the fact that he shares the same name as another bad guy in TE... :-?

As far as Allen, you guessed it. ^_^ He's the youngest in their group - around 27. 8)
wicked wrote:Do keep having weirdo dreams and making us all your stars (but I'm the supah-stah!). Love to know where this goes. And really who is The Man??? (Definitely not Ed Lover and Dre.)

~Wicked
Actually, I haven't figured out who The Man is just yet. :oops: There's a reason, though. :wink: I'm leaving everything kind of flexible for the first three chapters, and then it'll all be set in stone. At that point, I'll know who "The Man" is. 8)
8) 50 days til <s>I leave for Florida</s> FREEDOM! Image

I have been crowned the Queen of Ghetto Foods.

Puppy used all my mind soap. I apologize... :lol:

The best typo EVAH: ?Circe, I can?t stay in her much longer! It?s hot...!? Epyon called.

Bubby to Morri: Man! You're way out of my league!

"I think he's hormonal." - Morri

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Morrighan wrote::lol: Now, that really does sound like me in real life.... ^^;; Except for the forceful persuasion part... :lol:
So is that a "no" to having that in your character? 8) It could create some tension between Jackie and Morri... Fun-ness... :lol: - In the story, I mean. :eek: :lol:
8) 50 days til <s>I leave for Florida</s> FREEDOM! Image

I have been crowned the Queen of Ghetto Foods.

Puppy used all my mind soap. I apologize... :lol:

The best typo EVAH: ?Circe, I can?t stay in her much longer! It?s hot...!? Epyon called.

Bubby to Morri: Man! You're way out of my league!

"I think he's hormonal." - Morri

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The Elelmental Paladin wrote:i remember your dream and i want to be a part of this madness. 8)
:) I was hoping you'd ask. ^_^

Okay, your code name (unless you want to change it) will be Paladin. I need a first name. :wink:
8) 50 days til <s>I leave for Florida</s> FREEDOM! Image

I have been crowned the Queen of Ghetto Foods.

Puppy used all my mind soap. I apologize... :lol:

The best typo EVAH: ?Circe, I can?t stay in her much longer! It?s hot...!? Epyon called.

Bubby to Morri: Man! You're way out of my league!

"I think he's hormonal." - Morri

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:lol: Oh no, the forceful persuasion is fun. :D
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench. :-P

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8) Okey-day.

Thinking about a codename, yet? :)
8) 50 days til <s>I leave for Florida</s> FREEDOM! Image

I have been crowned the Queen of Ghetto Foods.

Puppy used all my mind soap. I apologize... :lol:

The best typo EVAH: ?Circe, I can?t stay in her much longer! It?s hot...!? Epyon called.

Bubby to Morri: Man! You're way out of my league!

"I think he's hormonal." - Morri

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But Morrighan <i>is</i> a codename in and of itself. <i>Huge</i> mythological reference right there. :D

But if you want another one....then yes, I'll think of one.
<i>?I always know you?re about to say something very sweet or very stupid when you use my full name??</i>

Why yes, I <i>am</i> a saucy wench. :-P

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