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Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2005 12:57 am
by Eienvine
Oh my gosh, that's so tragic! It was Duo . . . so tragic . . . so well written. It was so descriptive and yet so succinct- the perfect length for a fic like that. Awesome job.
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2005 11:21 pm
by Caliborn
Oh wow... this was really wonderfully written. I felt my skin burning along with Relena's at the vivid descriptions. Although this was a wonderful short story, may I add my request to the others for a sequel? The last few lines gave the fic a somewhat unfinished feel.. but then again, that does seem like Japanese style. It's your choice, of course, but I would love to see additions to this great short fic.