Amour 3/? (NC-17)

Kristy · Post by **Kristy** » Sat Jul 09, 2005 7:49 pm

This is absolutely fantastic Zap. Emotionally riveting you can feel Relena's sense of loneliness and confusion as well as Heero's. The lemons sense were tasteful and done in such away that it was completely integral to the story. It isn't just sex. But something so much more. I absolutely love your writing. Amazing story. I can't wait for more!

lilac310 · Post by **lilac310** » Mon Jul 11, 2005 3:38 am

This is so good...I can't even begin to explain it.....seriously, I feel like crying whenever I think of Relena's emotional turmoil in the situation she had placed herself in....though she may deny it; it is still quite obvious that even for a second, she is hoping that her relationship with Heero could be more and that he would soon learn to love her.....this is really awesome..there's an incredible depth to the plot that makes this all the more interesting...keep it up!!!....

zapenstap · Post by **zapenstap** » Tue Jul 12, 2005 8:15 pm

I feel like crying whenever I think of Relena's emotional turmoil in the situation she had placed herself in....though she may deny it; it is still quite obvious that even for a second, she is hoping that her relationship with Heero could be more and that he would soon learn to love her.....

I think she definitely wants to be with Heero too. But part of the idea of this story is that she's not really in emotional "turmoil" even though she is wistful. Compared to DotH she's pretty patient and rational about the whole thing! lol. I think she understands that Heero needs lots of space and lots and lots of time, and she DOES want him to love her (T_T of course she does!) but she's not going to let him break her heart by waiting forever. So I dunno. I'm kind of exploring how it would be if they were "together" without really being together. Just together on occasion, in a way that doesn't make Heero feel that he should disappear and where Relena is not deceived.

lilac310 · Post by **lilac310** » Wed Jul 13, 2005 11:22 pm

I hear you on that.......but I was just imagining what Relena's emotion would've been like from my perspective if she were to actually wish for something more in their "relationship".....not just wistfully but something much deeper....I don't know how to explain it...

..anyway, the part that touched me the most, I guess, would be the one wherein Relena was laying on bed with Heero while he caresses her skin..and then she said Heero's name thoughtfully...and as though Heero already knew what she was about to say, he suddenly interrupted her and said, "Nothing's changed."......I guess, that was the part that made me feel that way and thus, assume or rather imagine (to make the story all the more dramatic for me

) that Relena's somehow falling for him again....sort of like the cliche, "my heart tells me one thing but my brain tells me another"...I just thought it would be a neat thing to play around that idea...thanks for the clarification, anyway.....

..Still cheering!!!

.....can't wait for Chapter 4..

zapenstap · Post by **zapenstap** » Thu Jul 14, 2005 9:41 pm

Hee Hee. It might be something like that

Mandaba · Post by **Mandaba** » Sun Jul 17, 2005 1:28 am

oooh. if stefy did a fanart for this, that'd be superb.

Firedemon86 · Post by **Firedemon86** » Thu Jul 21, 2005 10:34 pm

I just got donereading you story. Its great I can't wait to read more. I want to find out what heero is think and what happens if they get together again. Please post the next chapter soon.

perfectpeach · Post by **perfectpeach** » Fri Jul 22, 2005 5:40 am

I couold have sworn I wrote a review for this! I'm losing it. In fact I'm not even sure I had it in the first place :-?

well, all i can say is wow. two lemons in one chapter. im guessing life is happy down your end ^^ again, i love this fic and i am so curious to see where this is going. curiosity may have killed the cat, but nothings stopping me from seeing rhe end of ths fic! pweeeeeze write more!

star fighter · Post by **star fighter** » Sun Jul 24, 2005 5:53 pm

No new chapter yet ? I think I'm gonna cry

Well not really, but you' better believe that I'm going nuts with this suspense. Please, write more. And thanks for reading my desperate plea.

krzkid · Post by **krzkid** » Thu Aug 11, 2005 8:27 pm

i know this was supposed to be somber but maybe you could let relena be with someone and heero jealous

so much that he'll stop midway through one of his mission to go to her

Blissful Ignorance

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Amour 3/? (NC-17)

Zapenstap's Fanfiction.