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Posted: Mon Jun 27, 2005 8:29 pm
by star fighter
That was amazing. Though I really like their chemistry in bed
I also hope that they start developing deeper feelings for each other, specially Heero. I can only imagine the interesting situations that could result from that.
I hope you update soon because I'm really in love with this story. You are such a talented author.
Hugs,
Star Fighter.
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 8:40 pm
by zapenstap
Thanks everyone! I would like to make a brief annoucement that I have added an author's note to the end of the second chapter. For anyone who is afraid that this story might turn out like Desires of the Heart, please read my note and have your fears assuaged! Thank you very much for the feedback!
Posted: Tue Jun 28, 2005 8:59 pm
by The Angry Angel
Oh, Zappie (okay if I call you Zappie??) !!
That was great!! Ha! Ha! I like Heero's dialogue during you-know-what. He sounded so domineering !!
Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2005 1:16 pm
by Oyuki
I'm very curious as to how you're going to go about this relationship. Because relationships like these don't usually work out. Anyway, it is super awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 10:43 pm
by Alilamba
Ohhh, glory. Must go read the more. I actually adore this whole "realistic" thing..it's probably why I go more for AUs than not, because most of the hope and I guess, need of having H and R go through some whirlwind romance sort of overpowers their characters. Oh well. Not that I don't love those as well.
BUT THIS IS AWESOME.
Posted: Wed Apr 26, 2006 7:41 pm
by momiji_k
Wow! It's getting hot in here.
That was some pretty good stuff. I don't think I have ever read a Lemon arc before. Usually anything that had lemon was just for flavor once in a while, like in Desires of the Heart.
I think your writing is a solid as ever. Or maybe it's just that much better than anything on FFN so I don't notice.
