Missing by a Mile - ch 29

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Post by melrose_stormhaven »

I knew I was missing something...

And is it only me that's enjoying torturing Heero. Ah, the evilness!

Well, I love this chapter! As always, it was wonderful, funny and sad...XD

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Post by WindCloud »

This was a great chapter rose, I was wondering when relena would stop being all mushy in love and take matters into her own hands...haha Yuy needs to suffer...well at least it brings his feelings out for her if he has any.
Nicely written Rose...i'm awaiting ur next chapter..then hopefully...zeeee FINAL!! =D

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Post by star fighter »

8) thanks a lot for the new chapter, Rose. It really was worth the waiting, though I can't say I am totally happy because I am still looking forward to seeing Heero being tortured. :bounce: Gee, I'm starting to scare myself.

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Post by Beer-monster »

SHES BACK!!! :eek: SHE'S ALIVE!!! :eek: SHE WROTE A GREAT CHAPTER!!!! :evil:

*blows great big happy horn*
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Post by Beer-monster »

wrong smiley I mean :D
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Post by Oyuki »

she's gone! and he couldn't catch her. kinda makes me sad though 'cause he failed his mission. i hope he finally realizes not everything in life is a mission though. and i hope he also realizes his feelings for her. the scene with duo stealing une's car was great. and heero trying to get to the airport and then trying to reach for the landing gear was awesome. can't wait for the next chapter!
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Post by Stellar-Soldier »

Looks like its time to pick up Wing Gundam from the museum Heero.. cause for damn sure, youre not catching her on a bike! Though I do admire his willing to try. Sure, the chapter was short, but none the less amusing. Poor Duo.. what great lengths he goes for a friend... aw well.
As for that sudden call... who did it? It cant be Pagan... as much as he tested Heero, he wouldn't go that far as it would hurt Relena. Trowa couldn't have done it... he was off duty at the time... meh... it was Une in the bathroom with the roll of toilet paper! (Bah.. Clue) Anyway... yeah. This is an amusing chapter. Cant wait for the next.

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Post by Wingnut »

Stellar-Soldier wrote:Looks like its time to pick up Wing Gundam from the museum Heero.. cause for damn sure, youre not catching her on a bike!

Stellar-Soldier
Darn right. I have always thought of playing junk master and retrieveing the blasted hulks of Wing and Wing Zero and pieceing them together with the leftover scraps of the other 4 self-detonated Gundams to re-build Wing or Zero (minus the funky Zero system) for my own uses. My own personal aircraft being one of them.
Heero indeed will need something similar to break through and catch up to Relena.
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Post by Musiced »

Wonderfully done Rose! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON! It's killing me over here :bounce:
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Post by star fighter »

Rose, are you still alive ? Please, do not disappear :( We, 1xR soldiers, can't survive without our commander :salute:

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