Beer-monster wrote:An update so soon!!!
*satan and all his little wizards stare in bemusement at the flakes of cold white that float from the fiery skies*
*brandishes Deathscythe's heat-scythe*
Oh, it's a scythe!
Anyway, great chapter full of humour, a little waff and of course the clown getting smacked around a bit, always a pius
Trowa: I still maintain that Heero deserves the smacking more than I do.
Heero: You're the only one that feels that way.
Zechs: I second Yuy's statement.
Duo: And I third it.
Trowa: You can't 'third' anything, Duo.
Heero: No, he was calling third place in line to deliver your smacking.
Trowa: -___-;;;
Though this chapter does seem even shorter than the last. I think you are using some trick to make 7000 words seem short, you evil, cruel...
This chapter was originally 7000+ words; I chopped it to be about even with the last one.
:-? What am I doing, she'll take that as a compliment :-?
Indeed, I do! *bows*
Anyway great chapter, loved some of the metaphors you used especially in the flashback. bring on the next one

Trying! I have it all rough drafted; I had to go to a job interview in California and have had a pretty tough deadline at work + a case study due (I turned it in tonight), so that only leaves me 2 days to edit chapter 26.5/27, but hopefully, I can get it done. Or, if not by Saturday, by Sunday at the latest. Blah! Who came up with this crummy schedule? Oh, that would be me...
*hugs* Thanks for reading, Beery!
