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Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 4:50 pm
by Mizaya
Thanks for the reviews so far guys! It's great fun to read them!
Muahahahaha! Well I can't tell you what's going on with all of it, but I can let you in on a few things:
I promise it won't drag on, GM1, but there are a couple of chapters to go until the mission. Don't forget Heero and Relena have one full day left together.
And, Wingnut, I'll have to ask Zap about the Heart of the Sword thing. I've never read it, so I'm not sure what Dorothy was like. It was Zap's idea to put her in the story more though....

Don't worry, Dorothy is definitely not out to get Heero for herself.
It's so fun to see the different sympathies for either Heero or Relena. After we finished the chapter I said to Zap, "Poor Relena!" and she said to me, "Poor Heero!" It's all very tragic

Until next time! The plots basically worked out, now we just have to write it!
Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 7:49 pm
by Calla Lily
Cole disturbs me greatly, even more so than Dorothy's double-scheming and mysterious intentions. Even if it was somewhat predictable, I still wish it didn't happen. And for some strange reason, I feel both Relena's and Heero's pain, not just one over the other, but that they're both suffering.
Next chapter, damnit. Where's the next chapter?!
Aarrrrrgggghhhh! (j/k)
Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 8:09 pm
by NafX
Ooohhh wow!!!!
You can't know how excited I was to see this update ...
Dorothy is a shocker! But she's one of those love to hate characters isn't she? I'm not convinced she's all bad though ... I think she's a big, fat sneak ... and I wonder what she's REALLY up to ...
As for Cole the freak ... how creepy is he? *shudder*
I'm visualising a dirty old man with obsessive compulsive disorder ...
Anyway ... love, love, love it!!!!!
Be back superfast with lots more .. please .. pretty please? *hopeful look*
Great job!!!
~Nat.
Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 8:49 pm
by miz_lou
GAWD DANGIT HEERO! *grabs Heero and pounds his head against the wall* Why didn't you follow your emotions? *choke hold* Baka!!
*shivers* And I had a feeling Dorothy was a bad card *bangs head on wall* when are they going to start listening to me?
Ha ha, no rendition of miz_lou's playhouse this time *dissappointment*

Yeah right. At least it won't be a superlong review
But that doesn't mean the quality of writing has decreased at all!! GREAT job guys I mean, seriously! I can't wait to see what unfolds!! It will certainly be interesting with all the twists and turns you guys have put us through *pants* This story should seriously come with a General Health Warning *grasps heart*
Side note: I'm curious as to how exactly Zechs approached the topic with Heero...man, that situation would totally suck.
Can't wait for the action to start! And to see how things develop and Heero's earthshattering confession of his undying love *looks around* there will be a confession...right? *wild look in eyes* There HAS to be a confession!!
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So yeah...See ya next chapter!!

Posted: Tue Mar 08, 2005 11:24 pm
by WindCloud
Ohhhhhhhhhhh another chapter out and I didn't have to wait a month..LOL..
Great chapter girls, keep it going can't wait to see MORE of 1XR. MORE MORE MORE....anything form heero's POV? Anyhoo i'm anxiously waiting the next chapter

Posted: Wed Mar 09, 2005 11:59 pm
by Wingnut
I neglectded to mention too how creepy Cole has become.
How to deal with him once the waste (and Relena) has been secured...
Heat Hawk... too messy.
Hyper beam cannon... too quick for that scum.
Burning finger (G Gundam)... time to blow up us a head.

Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2005 11:39 am
by Raspberry
*holds breath*

Oh. My. GOD!
Now I wasn't expecting THAT! Dorothy, you evil *censurship* *censurship* *censurship* and *censureship*!!! How COULD she?!
Ah, but I must admitt, I
was melting when I read how Relena was showing Heero that she
does desire him
This story is one of the most intriguing I've ever read, and I
really mean it! This fanfic is amazing, unpredictable, and so... I just can'r find words which would describe the greatness of it!
So my duty and honour is to say:
wonderful job Zapenstap and Mizaya! 
Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 3:53 am
by Mandaba
ahh im on the edge of my seat waiting to read what goes on between heero and relena. edge of my seat, edge of my seeeat!

Posted: Fri Mar 11, 2005 9:42 pm
by AkizukiMeiko
I love the way its going, but I think that Dorthy is not playing fair, how about letting Trowa or Quatra take care of her and then let Heero loose on Cole. Does he really want another man touching what is his, and by that I mean Relena.
Posted: Sat Mar 12, 2005 2:16 pm
by The Angry Angel
How cruel and mortifying. This story is really derogatory and disgusting.