Breathless [NC-17!]

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Post by Leia Avenrose »

Iron Dog: it's really something completely different. :D I've had this story planned for the past week or so, and when it was finally finished, I was all "YAY!" about it because mostly it was erotica and Inuyasha, my current obsession. :D
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Post by alexxie »

Wahee!!! Good work! Write more! geek~ :lol:
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Post by silent muse »

wow! I love it!
"Sometimes I wish I could go back to being five again, where the most difficult decision I had to make was whether I colored the flower red or blue. Back to when my brothers and I would stay out all day playing cops and robbers or cowboys and Indians. Back to when life was easy and carefree. But that would mean a life when I didn’t know you. I don’t think I’d like that too much."
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Post by luved_by_bishie_duelistch »

That was very awesome. i look forward to more, and i agree that it was very good for your first Inuyasha fic. (My fics are pretty much crap tho. my sis Eru tries to tell me otherwise, but i think they lack detail) anyway, excellent job for your first IY fic. more please? *laughs at self childishness*
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Post by Assassin_chiq »

Wow... that was hot. :oops: ermm... I mean the ah-- plotline-- yeah the plotline was excellent :wink: lol, no it was great really! I just read previous one by you and wow that was great to. You write good smut... but it's... romantic-ish smut... lol sorry, I have problems... lol anyway
Till next time :salute: ,
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It made me crawl back, desperate for more?
The cravings were uncontrollable?
In my hunger, I killed?
In my need, I slaughtered?
I was a puppet to my desire,

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Post by Rhioka_Soutome »

:lol: I can't believe I'm reading smut..... hehehe, oh well, no one has to know >_> <_<. You did a great job on this one, alot of people make it so Inuyasha is strangely mean and agressive. Of course it makes some sense, but just like you said in this chapter, he grew to be tamer, and not as, uhm... a$$holistic. I loved it.

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Post by morgansgirl23 »

Wow what a great story. Very passionate and to the point! Bravo! :salute:
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Post by Leia Avenrose »

*_* You're all very welcome! :) <333~
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Post by DarkAngel »

whew i love that whew got me sweating :D please write more :D

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Post by saneless »

best inu-lemon i've read so far, good work! :salute:

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