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Primus2021
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Post by Primus2021 »

Great fic, But WTH was up with that Epilogue, I thought it should've gone down like this,

Part 1. 3 mounths after Chapter Chapter 10, Duo & Hilde get married.

Part 2. Aug, 7th AC 204, 9 years after Opperation METEOR, & The annaversary of the day Heero & Relena 1st met, (Heero is 25, & Relena will be 24 in 3-6 days) anyways its their Wedding Day & EVERYONE is there, The Paster, Relena, Heero, Duo, Hilde, Howard Duo's friend from the Srcapers unit, Trowa, Midii, Cathy, Quatre, Dorothy, Rashid, The Magunics, Quatre's 29 sisters, Wufei, Sally, Zechs, Noin, Lady Une, Treize, (Yes, He survived the explotion) Maeramaea, All of The Preventers, Relena's old Euntorauge from St. Gabrealles, Heero's & Relena's Fouster Moms, Howerd the wheat farmer & his Wife (From Chapters 3 & 4) The Press, The 25 ESUN Deligets, & the Pubilc. (Lets jusy say Relena still has to punish Herro for all the things he did when they wrer 15, " HELL Has No Furry Like A Women's Scorn!!!!").

Part 3. The Wedding Night, Just use your Limon, Lime, or Citrus IMAGENATIONS to figure out this part.

Part 4. Relena's Dream.

Part 5. What happend when Relena woke up.

Part 6.1. 8 years after the wedding, Heero is telling His Life Story to his 8 & 4 year old sons & treir 7 year old Dog " Wing ZERO",
6.2 Wile Pregnant Relena is having a Tea Party with Her 6 & 4 year old Baby girls, (Thats 7 Yuy's total, SCARRY, thats isn't it! >:) 8) >:) :D >:) :lol: :lol: >:) )

Anyways They Live Peacefully & happily together, With some miner threats to their lives, But kets just say The Boys Are just Like Clones of Their Father :D , & the Girls their aren't total Pasefists if you catch my drift, Again Great fic, loved Heero's Mom & the way he acted in this fic, Make another "Playing House" book just like this one but from Heeros POV, that way we get the story from both of them not just one of them.
Sincerely: Primus2021

"1xR FOREVER!!!!!!!!!"

>:) 8) :D :lol: :salute:

lilac310
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Post by lilac310 »

Cute story.... I love how this turned out! ....just amazing!
"People who want to die, hurry up and die. You're wasting good air."
Professor G., Episode 24

Quatre: Trowa's dead!
Heero: Yeah, you killed him.
Episode 25

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