Caveat Emptor - Chapter VII

[Raspberry]

OMG!

This is truly AMAZING!

I COMPLETELY have to agree with others!

And I see that ice princess discovered the fact about Duo the Barbarian as well

I luv the 1xR romance, I luv 6x9 romance and I just can't wait to see reaction of both Duo adnd Hilde when they see each other

Please update soon Melodrama! And like the others here, I adore your work!

[Kaili Charmer]

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! I so happy!! You make my day with your nice long chapter with lots of sap and deep thinking that can be related to at the moment, hahahaahahah...I love you! Next chapter soon? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE??? :razz:

[Kuroi Ruy]

such an abrupt ending...
Oh well, u are mad good! Plz update soon!




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"Poor humanity! What could I not make you belive?"-Weishaupt

[Morganeth]

WOW! So worth the wait! so beautiful! you must, please give us more soon! though with a story this good, I can honestly say I'll wait no matter how long!

Excellent Chapter as always!

Morganeth

[melodrama]

You were very magnanimous not to leave a cliffy here, given your updating history

LoL! Magnanimous? Wow... I've been called a lot of things lately, but magnanimous has not been one of them. I think I'm going to take that as a compliment

Your flair for description really shows in the recurring blossom, and Heero's fidgeting was immensely cute while somehow remaining Heero-like.

Thank you TQ! I'm so glad you thought Heero was... well... Heero-like. It really did take me some time to write that scene, mainly because for a while there, I just couldn't get into his head AT ALL! *glares at Heero* Stubborn male.

I'm not in a super big hurry for them to get to their next trial.

Next trial? What next trial? It's all plain sailing and happy endings from here... really... (you know, we really need a halo icon here, don't you think? *grins*) Okay... so maybe I'll let them have a chapter or two of happiness... but then... Dun Dun Daaaa. Teehee.

So I'm afraid you'll have to update!

And after such a kind and enthusiastic review, there's no way I couldn't. Thank you so much TQ!! *hugs*

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They're actually going through with it!!!

Hilde is AWESOME in this fic!

I have told you before how much I appreciate your support before, haven't I Morri? Well, if I haven't, let me say it now. *GLOMPS* Thank you, Morri-chan! I can honestly say that your kind, and enthusiastic reviews really do help keep me going when I'm feeling somewhat run down and overwhelmed. You really are great. *hugs*

It was pretty good......................No I'm just kidding that was awesome.

Yay! Thanks PS87! I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and I'm sorry it took me so darned long to get it out. I've already finished the first scene of the next chapter, so I really do hope to have it out soon. As for Heero's memory, while light won't be shed on his identity for a little while longer, there will be some more hints offered in Chapter Eight, so I hope you'll check it out once it's posted. Thanks again!

Oh! And as for the art reference... There is a picture of Slave Heero done by Stefy in her gallery. Unfortunately the others I can't offer links for, as they remain unposted by the artists. The main one by Darkwing, I hope she will be able to show soon, as it depicts a later scene in the fic. Because it's a fairly major spoiler, Darkwing has been kind enough to keep it 'undercover' until the relevant time. *huggles Darkwing* She is INCREDIBLY patient with me.

::sigh:: That picked up my droopy mood just delightfully. Thank you so very much. ^___^

*hugs* and you have no idea how much it picked up my mood to know that Chpater seven had picked up your mood. Thank you AoD!!

[melodrama]

I loved how WE knew Relena was the one Heero was waiting for, but he didn't. Just hearing all of his doubt, and all of the other thoughts passing through his mind, . . . Ahhh yes, absolute enjoyment. It was even better once Relena finally showed up. Good god! The tension was so thick you could've cut it with a knife! I adore angsty/romantic stuff ^_^

*glomps* Eden! I'm so very happy that you enjoyed reading and that you felt that it was worth the ridiculously long wait. I really hope I don't keep you waiting that long again. Even if it's just so I can get another of your lovely reviews. You have no idea what an amazing pick-me-up they are.

Thank you so much!! Especially for the muse food Love Ya!!

I demand more HEERO, RELENA, and TROWA interaction!!!..Yipee!...Maybe Trowa can try to take advantage of her and Heero will come to the rescue!!!...lol.no offense to Trowa lovers out there 'cuz I love Trowa as much as you guys do..teehee...

LoL!! Oooh dear, Lilac, you really do make me laugh. I don't know if I can really meet your expectations regarding more Heero, Relena, Trowa interaction. I'm afraid Trowa may just be a little distracted by other events soon .

And no... no advantage taking by Trowa, I'm afraid. He's too much of a gentleman for that. *grins* But he does still have a very big role to play in the story yet. So I hope you'll like what the story has in store.

*hugs* Thank you!!

This story seems kind of addicting...I have been checking on for updates from time to time. Oh, I like this chapter really...but UGHHH...cliffhanger! Left us all readers hanging. Oh, please continue with the next chapters. ^_^

Thank you for your kind review Deadpoet! I'm so pleased that you've perserved long enough with reading to make it this far. I have been quite slow updating I'm afraid, damned real life. But my muse is back in full force, so I really do hope to have more for you soon.

Thanks again!

Why does Trowa always get the shaft?

OMG! Ice Princess... I nearly fell off my chair when I read your opening line. *giggles* Why indeed? But believe me... Trowa's getting a little more action than you think... whoops... better not give anything away.

And I have to echo sentiment mentioned somewhere earlier that Hilde is AMAZING in this fic. Her character is so complex, rich and dynamic...I love every scene she's in and I can't wait for her own romance to rekindle with the inevitable discovery of Duo, the Barbarian *rar*.

I'm wrapt that you like Hilde in this, Ice. I've always been a fan of Hilde, but she so often gets overlooked or kept somewhat two dimensional in so many fics I've read in the past, and I guess this is just my attept to give her some more... substance? I just see her as being so much more than simply Duo's love interest. I mean.. come on... the girl's got spunk.

LoL... and you really are persistent on the reunion thing, aren't you?

Thank you Ice! Your reviews really do rock!!

[melodrama]

And I see that ice princess discovered the fact about Duo the Barbarian as well

ROFL!! Geez 'Berry, you really are convinced, aren't you?! *giggles* tsk tsk.

*hugs* Thanks for your continued support Raspberry! I plan to have more for you soon, so I hope you'll continue to read.

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa!! I so happy!! You make my day with your nice long chapter with lots of sap and deep thinking that can be related to at the moment, hahahaahahah...I love you! Next chapter soon? PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE???

For you Kaili... anything. *grins* I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, KC. There's still LOTS more to come, so I hope you'll keep reading.

*hugs* Thank you!

such an abrupt ending...

A little abrupt perhaps. Or maybe not Thank you for reading, and reviewing Kuroi. I hope you'll enjoy the chapters to come!

WOW! So worth the wait! so beautiful! you must, please give us more soon! though with a story this good, I can honestly say I'll wait no matter how long!

Thank You Morganeth! It's sure reassuring to know that you've been so patient with me and my slow updating. I'm trying really hard not to keep you waiting so long again though, so I hope you'll enjoy the next installment too. *hugs*

[sitboy007]

hey, i read this chapter a while back, and REALLY liked it. Just wanted to know how far along you are mel, though i kno writing takes a long time. I've been writing the same fic for two years (hehe).
Suggestion (more like a plea): The resurection of Duo would make me very happy, but if he is permanently 6 feet under then ok.
One more thing, there's nothing going opn btwn trowa and dorothy is there? I thought i read something suggesting that BUT i could have read wrong.

keep writing ~ mucho luv

- S.B.007

[Raheedeken Saoyumira]

Whoa.... so intense and so wonderfully written... shucks, I wish I could do something like this... *sighs* Oi, kudos to you melodrama!!! *applauds enthusiastically* Where's the next one? Where's the next one? I must definitely read it!!! I can't wait!!!!

[Darkwing]

WOW, Mel! How oculd I miss this!!! *hammer her own head*
But I'm here now! eheheheh :-3

First of anything...Fabulous Relena insight! Her thoughts truly are those of a young lady experiencing her first love! *claps hands*

And then I must say that there's an amazing fit between Hilde's memories and the current romantic situation that involves her mistress. Jeez...You really make Hilde look a deep character here. Even if her role is a secondary one, you don't miss the details.

And Trowa is another example of your psychological accuracy! He's just perfect! So much him! Even if his appearence here is brief, I can perfectly picture him ion my mind! *thumb up*

And then Heero? Heero...such a man! And you dear, make him so much in character that it's something amazing to see in an alternate universe like this!

This fiction keeps on being one of the vest that I have ever read and I don't politely ask you to keep on writing...I order you to! LOL
I'll pray that your Muse doesn't abandon you. And hey...I'm still here to push her, if you need me to!

P.S. Thank me? LOL! Thank you!!!! It's easy for me to read such a story and appreciate it. But you, dear, do the hard work here. Thank you so much for sharing! *huggles*