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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 4:03 pm
by Raspberry
Why thank you
War Dove!
Chibi-sitter made it for me, but the text is mine
It was one of few possibilities I thought Hilde could've said that Duo chocked on his cookie
Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2004 6:43 pm
by APerfectSoldier87
Rasberry you should write about it, btw should the next lemon be a songfic or just standard lemon
Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 6:41 am
by sweet_me_beajai
I vote for standard lemon!!!!
BTW, nice fic
Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 10:44 am
by Gundam Girl
Write another one, Joe. We'll test you!
Now if only Ryan will write one. Or did he?
Posted: Fri Nov 26, 2004 5:29 pm
by teardropdangel
How did I miss this one? Hot and sweet. Such a wonderful combination.
Posted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 3:42 pm
by Mellie
that was very interesting. I don't read too many lemons, but it was pretty good. I liked how the lyrics didn't seem forced for the sake of using them. I couldn't write a song fic for my life...well maybe if someone had a gun to my head but that is a different story. Anyways, i like when I read stories written by guys because they offer a whole new perspective. I mean it is quite dubious that a woman could write something the same way. Anyway, shutting up now.
Oh, and keep writing. be it lemons, continuations of previous fics, etc. Remember, I hold the all powerful smiting pillow!