that was very interesting. I don't read too many lemons, but it was pretty good. I liked how the lyrics didn't seem forced for the sake of using them. I couldn't write a song fic for my life...well maybe if someone had a gun to my head but that is a different story. Anyways, i like when I read stories written by guys because they offer a whole new perspective. I mean it is quite dubious that a woman could write something the same way. Anyway, shutting up now.

Oh, and keep writing. be it lemons, continuations of previous fics, etc. Remember, I hold the all powerful smiting pillow!