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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 3:40 pm
by Lady Casper
lol this is funny Tomorrow! BRavo!
Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2004 10:10 pm
by Morrighan
Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2004 2:23 pm
by zapenstap
Cute! I liked your little kid in Rigid (something about the descriptions there flowed) so Mizaya suggested I read this one too! Gets me in a 1xR frame of mind for my own writing work (which is WAY overdue)
I remember that song! I should bust that one back out. Do you think Heero would like Top Gun? Supposing that Heero even likes movies? I've wondered that before....
It's difficult to imagine Heero jamming to music for some reason, but I liked your depiction of him. And his son's adoration was fabulous. I liked the way he watched Heero to make sure he was doing it right.
The end of the story when Relena comes out is probably my favorite part, though. I liked her administering her husband and then cutting him off to take a phone call. hahahha.
Good work, Tomorrow
Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2004 11:20 pm
by AngelOfDeath
Oh man..... just oh man......
Heero rocking out to anything would be absolutely worth any amount of trouble to see. Maybe Relena should mount some surveillance equipment in the truck.
I totally thinking of Top Gun the whole time.... which transferred to Tom Cruise.... which transferred somehow to Heero dancing around in his underwear.
Not an unpleasent thought really.
Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 5:20 pm
by silent muse
lol, cute and funny!
