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Post by bookworm »

I always love the ending. I definitely do. I just love the 1xR scene. And I can imagine Relena getting her jersey souvenir...the original jersey worn by Heero, of course. I could see that happening. I definitely could. Don't u think so, Rose?

BTW, I already read this. I just wanted to comment about the ending now that I'm feeling better.
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Post by Red Ninja »

I don't think I've ever said this Rose, but this is my absolute favorite GW story. I believe I reviewed it a long time ago on FF.net. Man it's a good one. Love it pieces, just figured I'd mention that.
Well I can fight like the devil
Or do what I'm told
But one of these days
I've got to hit the road
On my way home
I'm coming home
That's where I'm going

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Post by Sovereign of Silence »

Brilliant :razz: i finally get time to read it and i think its marvelous i love the idea of the story and i like how you involved everyone together and as individuals ,Trowa had been more open
one of the best story :salute:
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Post by Oyuki »

My God! I've always loved this story! I think this is the first of your stories that I ever read. Anyway, it's wonderful! I loved every single minute of reading this! Yeah, I even have this as one of my favorites on my ff.net profile! This... this... I can't even find words, girl. Anyway, I'll finish off by telling you that this is one of the best 1xR fics out there... or is that out here? Whatever, it's one of the best I've EVER read and one of my favorites of all time! It's great! Write more 1xR! :bounce:
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Post by Chibi-sitter »

:D i love it equally as i love the series, EW & BT put together.

i highly recommend it!

im not going to spoil it :wink:

just dont read it all (chapters 1 to epilogue) in one night like i did....i finished it at 7am and i had school that day!!! and i fell asleep in all my classes :-P
my family, friends and teachers asked what kind of story would do that?

"a f****g geat one!" i said to my friends but left out the naughty word when replying to family and teachers. and great is an understament...there are other positive words....but then this will be a looooong review.

and it was worth it, i'd stay up again and read it any time :bounce:

THANK YOU BLACKROSE

i enjoyed this one! no fic ive read yet has made me laugh so hard my jaw bones ache, make me cry out that i had to cover my mouth so i wouldnt wake up the house and soak my top from tears.

my one and forever always favourite fanfic! i dare anyone to beat it! mawhahahah!

p.s when deep into story i started to believe it was actually something the creators did! its that damn good!!!

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Post by Mellie »

Rose! I loved this! It had everything a person could want and was so true to the characters! :bounce:

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Post by sweet_me_beajai »

hi ms rose!!!

i read this fic a while back(and i just re-read it again*blush*) but i don't think i ever had the chance to post a comment.....

this fic is sooo amazing! everything you could posibly want is in this fic! drama, romance, angst, action, lemon....am i missing something?

well really, its really really good! this is the kind of fic that i'd read whenever i feel sad or whenever i read a very angst heero and relena death fic!!

thanks for sharing it! and keep it up!!
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Post by angel222 »

OH I JUST REALLY LOVED THIS FIS *_* *_* *_* *_* *_* *_* *_* *_*

I can't wait till you update murder by moonlight u are such a good writer :D
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Post by brandi »

This is one (if not the top) of my favorite fics of all time. I've read it twice (bet both times on a different site) and absolutly adore it.

It was thr fist (and best) fic I'd read about their lives contnuing on a different trck after the war ended. Too many (I'm not saying it's bad, just that there's too many) fics just create another war for them to fight in, just so there'll be a plot to the story. I was very happy to see your characters and how'd they'd grown and changed over time, but not uncharacteristicly so. I really loved the fact that Herro was a soccer star in college, and not a drifter with no point in life but to follow Relena around.

The entire ending was fabulous. I loved how the other characters were there making it happen. I didn't see it at all as too easy. I thought it was the perfect way to end such a fic.

This will always be one of my top favorites. It's a classic.
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Post by ealpha_scorpio »

That was incredible Rose!
I already finished reading your fic...and I'm really amazed by your talent in writting. You mad me cry :cry: when I read that Relena had lost her baby! I really thought that she might be pregnant but this was totally unexpected. Poor Heero!

I want to thank you for the wonderful moments that I enjoyed reading your fic. Hope to see you soon agian & (lolZ:) be amazed again!
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