Final Mission Status 5/?, by Mizaya and Zapenstap [Lemon]

[Lady Casper]

This is excellent. I wanna know more like the next chapter.
I couldnt tear my eyes away from it. Its good good good. Keep it up!

[Caliborn]

Oh my gosh! I was so happy to see this story updated, and let me say, the newest installment was not disappointing. Like some others have mentioned, the thing that worries me most is the aftermath . . . Relena might start to expect things from Heero that he has no intention of doing. She has my sympathy-- the Preventors are really putting her through a lot . . . granted, she's enjoying it -now-, but what happens when she wakes up from the daydream?

And I think the no-Heero POVs add more mystery and suspense . . . I like having to decipher what's going on merely from Relena's observations. I think Heero's in even more turmoil than Relena right now. What I'm -guessing- is that he's enjoying himself too, but he feels guilty about enjoying himself because he knows it -can't- go past the week that they have. So he's torn between going full-throttle, so to speak, leading her on, enjoying what they have while they can have it, or pulling back and being as distant as the mission will allow, so Relena won't get her hopes up. He doesn't want to hurt her but at the same time he can't help himself . . . And so this little fiasco has completely ruined what little balance he might've found.

The part where Noin finds him sitting on the bench . . . I can only imagine what sort of turmoil he was in, though of course he's too proud to show anybody. ^_^

I may be way off here, but this is what I'm thinking . . . Anywho, I must reinstate the fact that I love this story and shall be hungrily awaiting the next chapter, and wonderful job on this one-- It really got me thinking. I love stories that have more than one layer of depth-- this is truly well-done and descriptive; I really get caught up in all the character's emotions.

^_^ Thanks for deciding to write it!

[Stellar-Soldier]

It is official... Heero has been broken. Makes one hell of a good story though! Keep it up!

[Alex Sinisterra]

/falls off chair/ Goodness, this story is great.

Very powerful and so heartbreaking.

Amazing.

[GM1]

There isn't a teeny weeny little change that you all will be posting chapter 6 is there?! I'm trying to be good...patiently waiting. But...I've been following this fic since you first started it.

I'm loving it so far! This is one of the few GW fics that has an original plot line that hasn't been repeated over and over, just with the characters saying and doing different things.

Please post soon!

[Lady Juliana]

Gha! This is great! I loving this fic! Keep it up you 2

[Raspberry]

*swallow*

Girls, this was truly amazing. I'm not able tp speak or even breath properly. I feel sorry both for Relena and Heero. I just wish them to be happy.

You two are mistresses og puting emotions in words. Few times I've read sentences more than twice, because they were so beautiful.

I wish I could write something more, but you made me speechless.

Truly, great work girls, and please post another chapter soon (but don't rush!). Again, excellent job!

[NafX]

Come back!!!!!
It's been too long ... *whines*

*sigh*

*pout*

*sigh*

Please????

~Nat.

[zapenstap]

Haha! Don't sweat it. We're working in it! I'd say we'd have it ready soon, but Jami is going out of town this week, so the earliest i will have the draft will be sometime next week, but I'll snap it out asap! Sorry for the wait! I guess we're just busy busy girls!

[miz_lou]

Realization dawned on Noin suddenly. ?You mean you?re not going to tell her?? She was flabbergasted, appalled. ?Are you insane? Zechs! She?s your sister!?

?She can?t know, Noin.?

Arrrg, insufferable man! He's just :evil: (SCREAMS)

Reaching out, she put a hand on his arm. Her touch made him start. She stared, fascinated to see surprise in Heero?s eyes. Her fingers lingered on his wrist. He turned to look at her and she smiled.

?Thank you,? she murmured. ?This is just what I needed.?

I just LOVE how you guys relay to us a clue about Heero's feelings through his features, I mean, the guy has gotta feel SOMETHING (I'm not bias, I swear *innocent halo*) His eyes are always changing in this chapter, even though they have remained unchanged in the previous chapters, and even Noin is starting to see read some of Heero's features as expression of emotion...

?Did you see him pound that glass of wine in the kitchen?? Sally whispered.

If that isn't nerves for the Perfect Soldier, I don't know what is...

miz_lou: (fixes Heero with a pointed stare) When did you learn about all that, setting up the romantic atmosphere? That can't all be from Noin...
Heero: (silence)
miz_lou: No answer, hmm? And when did you get so good at completing...that particular mission?? (narrows eyes at him) Piloting mobile suits with ease is one thing
Heero: *blushes* shuddap

I am not a big fan of Wufei's but you guys do a *nice* job potraying him and Sally. He's certainly right, it is "indecent" to watch your friends sharing a private moment. However, you two do an amazing job keeping it decent zapenstap/mizaya.

?It?s all right,? Heero?s voice came through the transmission in a soft whisper. ?I?ve always protected you, Relena. I won?t let anything happen to you.?

AWWW Interesting how there isn't a script, yet Heero can come up with these REALLY sweet things to say to her~like it was second nature *hint hint* I love how he goes out of his way to comfort her

But, alas, *sigh* I have to agree that things are getting pretty complicated.

PS>Was there...er, protection? We wouldn't want to complicate matters further...

ONWARD~to the NEXT chapter!
See ya in the review section there

~miz_lou