Cool story though!!
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I agree with Oyuki, please continue on with this. It's so twisted and dark that you just can't leave us hanging!! Please, for the love of kami write more!!!!
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damn, you've got me intrigued. what's going on?
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wow. That was intense. I read it and I couldn't look away. I was glued to the screen reading that. Just who is IT? That part is really got my curiosity. And how did they get captured? maybe a prequel...because...well...I kind of know how it ends. But I mean before the pain and torture. Anyway, very well done. It was good and amazing and dark and horrible. Awesome
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Excellent little piece of writting here. I think even if you didn't know the characters (i.e. first time reader), you'd understand the love involved in Inu Yasha's decission at the end. Well done.
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I'm not evil. It's simply unfair portrail by the media.
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I have one word for this story. A-fucking-mazing. Why? Well, for one, the gore, and the whole blood and just GORE, again, of it was brilliant. I agree with Ice Princess; despite the fact that I wished to throw up, my my, I sat riveted, and why? Because it just chained me down. Now I can see Inuyasha's decision in the end; he had seen her suffer, and each time he was tortured, she suffered with him.
Having IT come back that day; Kagome was just going to suffer anyways, and he wanted to put an end to that. *hums* Nevertheless, that was probably one of the best fics I've ever read, in all honesty, that deal out a sharper look on dark angst and gore.
Beautifully done. Definitely a 10/10 read.
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Having IT come back that day; Kagome was just going to suffer anyways, and he wanted to put an end to that. *hums* Nevertheless, that was probably one of the best fics I've ever read, in all honesty, that deal out a sharper look on dark angst and gore.
Beautifully done. Definitely a 10/10 read.
*mumbles something about wanting a favorites list made for the users on BI*
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