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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2004 1:22 pm
by Aristale Wolf
I love it, and I absolutely love the way you put Zechs as the big brother that he is! It's beutiful just one suggestion...WRITE MORE OFTEN!! :wink:





Posted: Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:37 am
by WindCloud
SO SHORT.>!!! Its not on ff.net yet..lol I usually checke there first but..anyhoo good chapter..wheres the NEXT ONE.!!!!

Posted: Sat Jun 12, 2004 7:19 am
by Melville's Best Friend
You really should tell me when you update so I don't feel like the jerk sister that doesn't care about her sister's great accomplishments.

And I blame WW2 on you.

JUST KIDDING!!!!

Gah, you outdid yourself again, my fav sister. What a great chapter. I feel torn between all the characters, and my heart bleeds for Heero who feels like she's left him cold.

Serves him right since that's what he always did to her.

And Wuffles!!!! I *do* feel sorry for him!!! To love someone and be so strong as to leave them for the one they truly love...

And "him" which is Zechs. Evil evil jerk. But...he did stop them...and...so I might like him...and...I hope that...it all turns out well. :)

I want to just snuggle Rel up. I can't even imagine the hurt she inflicted on herself when she sat down and thought about what she almost did and how that would effect her only true LOVE.

Gosh, I just want another chapter so BADLY.

Great, wonderful, stupendous, fabulous, awesome, job, sis.

I can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Heart,
me

Posted: Sun Jun 13, 2004 7:36 pm
by Fatimai1
oh it's so exciting! I just can't imagine what will happen next! PLEASE CONTINUE :salute:

Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 6:28 pm
by wicked
silversong wrote:
*must not start falling for Milliardo*
(giggles) Hee-hee.....

Wonderful, as always, Wicked. Are you going to work on the other one soon? (hopeful smiles)

~Silver
And I've succeeded in not falling for him! HUZZAH for me!!! Why you ask? *points to current icon* It's his fault that I have not fallen prey to Zechs. And I thank and worship Mr. Natsume every damn day for it. ~_^

Thank you Silver. *glomps* I shall be working on the other one soon. I'm having a hard time focusing right now and I don't want to begin writing on the other one and it lead somewhere completely opposite of where I want it to go.

Much love,
Wicked

Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 6:51 pm
by wicked
RyanEX2000 wrote:(sneaks into Wicked's room and replaces the cassettes player under her pillow)

Who'd a thunk these things actually worked
So that's where all those strange images came from when I slept!!! It was all YOUR fault Ryan! Who knew you were such a hentai? ~_^
Sure yer not gonna forget about this one for some time now Wicked-chan?Two chapters in quick succession.Nice...but worrying.
:-P :-P :-P
Nice to see her questioning herself about her make-out with Wufei.Also funny the way Heero picked up on Wufei's nervousness bout Zechs being there.
Wuffles ain't stupid. Of course he's going to nervous around Heero. Though if Heero's reaction to Wuffle cat, Bo, is any indication, then he should be nervous. Poor baby. The future path Wufei is destined to walk is a sad one.
Personally I would've had Heero walk in on 'em

"BANG" :-P
Heero: *walks in seeing a 5xR moment* :eek: :pale: :evil:
5xR: *smooching*
Heero: *whips out gun...not THAT one* Omae o korosu.
Wufei: *breaks away* :eek: Kisama!
Relena: :pale: I'm tainted!! Oh dear God help me!!!
Heero: *shoots gun*
Gun: BANG!
Zechs: HEERO YOU IDIOT!!!
Relena: :pale:
Wufei: :eek: Kisama!
Zechs: You shot my sister you fool!!!
Heero: :oops: Gomen....
Relena: :cry:
Zechs: Your eyesight always did suck.

Heero walking in was out of the question as you can clearly see. :wink:

Love,
Wicked

Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 6:57 pm
by wicked
Raspberry wrote:Wicked, I'm surely not the one who first read it, but I know that my eyes always shine when I see new chapter of this great story. I think Miliardo was very -in- character - protective but still tough. And Heero... well, only thing I can say is "Poor Heero". The same for Relena ( "Poor Relena" ). With the honetsty from my heart, I BEG YOU FOR MORE! You and Melville are one my favorite writers! *_* :D
*huggles Raspberry* Thank you!!! I'm someone's favorite!!! Take that you evil work you!!!

Again thank you. I was worried about how I portrayed Milliardo (see here I go from calling him one name to another). I almost didn't post because I feared how I portrayed him. But so far people find him to be a-okay which is a huge relief.

More to come don't you worry. And certainly don't listen to Ryan. ~_^

~Wicked

Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 7:07 pm
by wicked
pilot03 wrote:Ouch.....poor Wuffles. I probably would have reacted the same way. Perhaps that is why I love this so far!!! Go Wicked!!! There's plenty of glomps if you put up the next chapter. Consider this a down payment!!
*GLOMPTY-GLOMPY-SUPER GLOMP!!!!!!!!!!!*
SQUEEEEE!!! Glomps galore for me!!!!! ~_^

Yes I feel incredibly sympathetic to Wuffles (Wufei: My name is not Wuffles!). Thank you P-03! *GLOMP*

By the way, where have you been? I haven't seen you around recently. It maketh me sad. You don't want me sad do you?

Heero: You deserve sadness. A lot of it.
Wicked: But...but why?
Heero: *glares at this chapter*
Chapter: *stands firm*
Heero: You're making that up now.
Wicked: I'm the writer. I can do that.
Heero: *death glare*
Wicked: *smirks*

*GLOMP*

Love ya bunches,
Wicked

Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 7:14 pm
by wicked
Tomorrow wrote:Perfect portrayal of Milliardo (I'm glad you decided to switch his name). Symbolically, I think it was a better choice, since he's now acting as a true brother towards Relena. I'm also glad that he's helping set Relena straight. I've always pictured Milliardo that way: protective, but knowing when to draw the line. Great job!
Thank you so very much. Coming from an exceptional writer such as yourself that means a lot. And I'm really glad you decided to stick this one out.

I agree that there is a great distinction between Zechs the soldier and Milliardo the older brother. At the end of GW Zechs did die, while Milliardo was reborn. The years between then and when this takes place was the newborn's growing period. Though it would seem the horny teenager stuck around regardless. *glances over at Noin*

I actually have a strange relationship with Zechs/Milliardo. I hate him and then at times I don't. At times I don't think he gives a hoot about his little sister and other times I think he cares greatly and maybe too much. Gah, my widdle head cannot handle the thinking.

Come out with the next chapter soon. I'm hoping that some good Heero/Relena moments are coming up. Please?!?!?!? PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!

:( (puppy face).
Actually there will be some good 1xR moments coming up, though they might take place after some more angsty 1xR moments. I'm finding the next step to be rather difficult.

Thanks and much love,
Wicked

Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 7:23 pm
by wicked
Calla Lily wrote:
*must not start falling for Milliardo*
*laughs* Wicked, I think that someone's getting to you!
Ha ha! But he hasn't you see! Another long haired beauty has taken the place that THAT person almost took residence. I have prevailed. *shakes fist triumphantly* Take that you metal head!!!

Milliardo: Good riddance.
Wicked: :eek: :evil: Omae o
Milliardo: Just stop right there. Only one person can say that and you are not him. Give up and go home.
Wicked: *shuffles off bereft*

Great chapter, as always, and I thought that you did portray Milliardo very well and that in his own way, he's still trying to protect Relena. Their conversation shows that, especially when he tries to tell her the things that she should have known already... things regarding Heero...

~Calla.
Thank you! *huggles* Yeah he's normally an ass in my book but this time 'round I find him more human and all that other mush. ~_^

Yes, there are some things Milliardo shouldn't have had to say but Relena for all her wisdom is rather blind when it comes to Heero. But then Heero can be rather dense at times too.

Heero: She loves me. :lol: She loves me not. :evil:
Wicked: Um, Heero, aren't you supposed to use a flower for that?
Heero: Keep it down, I'm working. She loves me. :D She loves me not. :evil:
Wicked: *sweatdrop* Dr. J didn't tell you the difference between flowers and grenades?
Heero: I know the difference. For every time Relena doesn't love me I pull the pin and toss it in Wufei's bedroom.
Wicked: :eek:
Wufei: I'll get you back for this!!! Mark me words! I shall have my revenge!
Relena: Why do I think that's actually meant for Wicked and not Heero?
Wicked: *scurries away*

Heh.... Yeah I think even the natives are getting restless and Wufei's getting singed.

Love,
Wicked