Prey of the Wolf ch 2/?? Rated R/NC-17 (lemon)

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Post by Lady Casper »

That was really good. I was getting goosebumps from reading it. When you tell a story you really tell it! :wink:

It was cool how Heero was the wolf and how attached he got to Relena that quickly.

Awww man now I want a Heero/Wolf! :cry:

Maybe I should put that on my christmas list. :lol:
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Post by Fatimai1 »

*_* Oh that was so cool. to think you could have an animal in so many ways~ *_* I have to know what happens next 8)
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Post by Melville's Best Friend »

Heero's a wolf!!!!!!!

Relena: *MY* wolf. Rrrrrow.

Heero: O_o

Rose, what a WONDERFUL story!!!! You have Heero acting like Heero even as a wolf. That's pukkin' awesome. I had a completely different picture in my head when you said "Little Red Riding Relena"

Heero: She, actually, still has yet to 'ride'...no wait...she rode. Heh heh heh.

MBF: O_o;;; Eeek!!!!

But, I'm BEYOND impressed with this. Really. I'm outrageously happy that this isn't OOC!!!! ^____^ That is and was enough to make me giddy.

And...HEERO'S A WOLF!!!!

It's wonderful, missy...though I have to worry what will become of HEEROTHEWOLF now that he's killed a man. :(

And I have to wonder what their children are going to look like...

And I have to ponder why Heero's fur is sooooooo cuddely-soft.

Heero: Herbs and berries.

Relena: My butt. You were in my shower using my very expensive womanly shampoo.

Heero: *if wolves could blush*

^___^ Great, wonderful, inspiring, thought-provoking, haooy-loving fic. Keep up yourgood work, as I know you will!!!! ^___^

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Post by ealpha_scorpio »

That was WONDERFUL! Totally WONDERFUL! This was one of the coolest fics that I've ever read in this past few months. And the Idea is so great and totally new. Heero being a wolf! Sometimes lomon stuffs are really enjoyble :oops: but this was HOT *_* ! Relenas dream was so reall & for a moment I really thought that it really happend to her! Keep it up and please update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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I really had a problem finding your fic, you know! I read the fic a week ago and when I got back here to leave a review I lost it! lolZ...thank god you had left the url on your ff.net page! I usually find them there so please if you are having a new chapter or fic leave a url there. I'll check your page once in a while. Aloso some of the urls don't work!!!

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Post by ealpha_scorpio »

Sorry! The urls DO work! :-P
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Post by dragonlady9 »

I read this story a while back and thought I gave a quick reply on how great it was, but as I have read through it again I realize I didn't leave one at all!!!!! Opps!!!! :oops: So, here it goes, this story of your's is absolutely fantastic!!!! :D Please, please, please continue it, I am dying to know its ending and all the rest in-between!!! Now that I am done begging, have a wonderful day everyone!!!! :-P
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Post by Noir de Soir »

:D wow, i never thought someone could creat such a great concept with making heero a wolf! Great story, i'm waiting anxiously for an update!!!! :salute:
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Tonto in Spanish is used like dumb or fool. You're right. It's really weird 'cause the other day I said to my mom "Us, Keemosabee?" and my boyfriend didn't know where that was from so we had to explain it to him. Haha. Anyway, I like this story. FF.net are the NC-17 and songfic Nazi of the internet. Geez! Anyway, good job! :salute:
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I've never read a story about wolves and stuff. I must say this really has my interested. I haven't read chapter one yet, I have to go look for it. This is great. Please have more soon, Rose!
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Post by Oyuki »

After reviewing this I saw that I had already reviewed but I was like "I haven't read this before", and so I thought about it and I can't figure out why. It's a mystery. I don't know. I may have clicked on your story by mistake or something because I don't think that review has anything to do with it. Anyway, I"ll tell you again that your story is great and I can't wait for more.
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