How to Seduce Your P.A. 101 (NC-17) Part Two

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sweet_me_beajai
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Post by sweet_me_beajai »

please please please please please please please!!!! for the love of god please add another chapter!!! :wink:

that was sooooooooo great!!! i can't believe that you left it at that!!

just like Ms.(or is it Mr. or Mrs.??) Raspberry, i'd love to know what Heero really do for a living!!! its great that he would do such extremeties(sp?) just to get to know Relena better!! and fortunately for him, he got to know her waaaaay better!! :wink:

please, i'd like to know what happen after that! i hate to think that that was just a sort of 'one-night stand', though it did not happened at night! hehehehe

i also want to know how the rest of the guys react after what just happened to Heero, considering his situation when Duo called him earlier on. and i could just imagine Dorothy's knowing smirk when she finds out!! :lol: :lol:


i have a question:

would Heero and Relena feel awkward after having sex ( but in Heero and Relena's case i'd like to referr it to making love. especially since they can't keep thinking about the other--admit it or not) before really getting to know each other?

i really really really hope that you would write another chapter or more!! i want to know what happens to their relationship especially since they made love first, before really knowing each other. i've read alot of fanfictions like this, and all of them would just end after the love/sex scene! i mean, what happened after that? would their relationship work out?? especially since their relationship started in such a high level...

would they slow down....? *_*

would they raise it further to the next level.....? *_*

i want to know!!


please!

please!

please!

please!

please


...i'm gonna stop bothering you know.....sorry..... :oops:

.....

.....

type you soon... :D :salute: :salute:

*is it just me, or do you also find me annoying...? :oops: do you think i'm giving it too much thought? :oops:

i'm sorry, i just really want the best imaginable (or unimaginable) relationship for Heero and Relena, because as you already figured out, i'm a very big fan!! lol :oops:
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Post by Raspberry »

sweet_me_beajai wrote: just like Ms.(or is it Mr. or Mrs.??) Raspberry
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: It's Miss. Or just Raspberry :lol: :lol: :lol:
How crazy
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean
Song How Crazy by YUI

Just be yourself.
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Post by sweet_me_beajai »

It's Miss. Or just Raspberry

...sorry about that... :oops: :oops:

i should have read the side, its already there. but come to think of it, i think you could still be a Miss or a Mrs. even if i knew you were a woman.

sorry again :lol: :oops:
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Post by Raspberry »

Hey, no problem. You even made me laugh :lol: Besides, I'm just 14 so how could I be Mrs. ?.. Anyway, let's drop this (funny) subject and we better should start to beg melodrama to write more of this story! <-- that's the most important, right? :wink: :D
How crazy
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean
Song How Crazy by YUI

Just be yourself.
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Post by sweet_me_beajai »

Besides, I'm just 14 so how could I be Mrs.

i cannot believe i did not see that! i am sorry! :oops: :oops:

anyway, yeah! melodrama should really continue this fic! please... :bounce:

*subject regarding the "Ms-Mrs incident (was it even considered an 'incident'?)" is officially dropped. :wink:
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:salute: aktous fon
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Post by silent muse »

:lol: :lol: :lol:

absolutely woonderful! great fic, I want more! any chance for a sequel?

-muse-
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Post by Raspberry »

[groan] Aw, c'mon! How long we are supposed to wait fot another chappie, huh???? [/groan]
How crazy
Stop talking about me as if you know me
How crazy
I?ve been running away from the ship
sinking in the depths of the ocean
Song How Crazy by YUI

Just be yourself.
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Post by dragon agility »

very very good!

I loved this fic, it was excellent! The idea was great!

Is there anymore? Lol

Keep up the great work! :bounce:
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Post by Tobo Castit »

When are we going to get our next chapter?! I've read this same one ten times, I keep thinking you updated!
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