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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2004 4:42 pm
by HeerosChick1842
Yay! Another chapter! Makes me feel all fuzzy inside!
Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2004 1:32 pm
by Katisha888
Difficult to read because of the format. I have no doubt that you have come up with a good storyline, and it would be such a shame if other people skip it because at first glance it looks like a long line of sentences. Maybe you can edit this to make it more readable, or maybe by the next chapter?