
my first gundam wing romance story now paragraphed
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Yay! Another chapter! Makes me feel all fuzzy inside! 

Its all fun and games until a rampaging robot destroys half your city! ~*~
Oh...Thats a gun... - George (Case Closed) ~*~
Whats the cause of death?... We believe it is the knife in his back...- Case Closed ~*~
I only eat people who are not full of crap ~*~
Oh...Thats a gun... - George (Case Closed) ~*~
Whats the cause of death?... We believe it is the knife in his back...- Case Closed ~*~
I only eat people who are not full of crap ~*~
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Difficult to read because of the format. I have no doubt that you have come up with a good storyline, and it would be such a shame if other people skip it because at first glance it looks like a long line of sentences. Maybe you can edit this to make it more readable, or maybe by the next chapter?
Mosquitoes remind us that we are not as high up in the food chain as we think.
Oro! Oro? Ororororo....

Oro! Oro? Ororororo....
