
Final Mission Status 3/? Coauthored by Zapenstap and Mizaya
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Lemon-ish situation? Oh, yes, you're very observant. There might be some citrus coming up. Who can say? Well, Zapenstap and I can say, but you readers will have wait it out. Aren't I cruel? 

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On ending sentences with prepositions:
"This is the sort of pedantry up with which I shall not put" - Winston Churchill
On ending sentences with prepositions:
"This is the sort of pedantry up with which I shall not put" - Winston Churchill
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Sorry it took me so long to read this, but it was well worth the wait. It was absolutely wonderful, totally in character, and just truly powerful--such raw emotion. I could actually feel the tension, the confusion--the futility. Beautiful... beautiful.


The Importance of Tomorrow:
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
The clarity of the hindsight we obtain from a new day may be 20/20, but it provides us with biased knowledge of the experiences and emotions that were-- Not what could have been, if only we had the chance to look through those premonitory eyes.
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Well, ladies, I must say that you're killing me with suspense. I've waiting for an update, both here and on FF.net. (somehow, the system seems to be faulty and reviews aren't showing up properly)
Once again, congradulations on your fabulous work.
Now, excuse me while I have a heart attack from Heero's words...
Once again, congradulations on your fabulous work.
?I?m the one who loves you, Relena.?

"Chaos will always triumph over order; it is the way of things." ~Hexadecimal, ?Game Over?
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Be still my beating heart!....*screams inwardly while jumping up and down* I can't believe it, I can't believe it...he said it, he said it!
Darn, all I need right now is to see what is going on in Heero's mind whlie all this is going on...*sigh*
Darn, all I need right now is to see what is going on in Heero's mind whlie all this is going on...*sigh*
Mosquitoes remind us that we are not as high up in the food chain as we think.
Oro! Oro? Ororororo....

Oro! Oro? Ororororo....

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I agree!! It better be the truth, or Caliborn and I are gonna recruit Duo and maybe even Trowa to beat the truth outta ya Heero, *huff* Perfect Soldier or not!!Caliborn wrote:Awww! That <i>better</i> not just be "In Character", Yuy . . .
Ha ha, I love how you guys mentioned in Chapter two that the study and the bedroom were "the most private places of her house where she never invited company" Yet, aside from the kitchen, most of the interaction between Heero and Relena were in the study and bedroom AWWW
When did Heero learn how to cook?? Hmm, if I were Relena I wouldn't mind...though, I am not a reknown chef (but I got other good qualities for all those interested guys out there!

I just have to say, how's this for bizarre, that me and my best friend's names are Amy and Jamie!! But we didn't meet in Kindergarten. In fact, we are military brats, and (this doesn't happen often in the military) but we met in California, when I moved to Texas she moved to Oklahoma, when I moved to Ohio, she moved to Michigan--we've been following each other ever since!! ha ha! (for those of you who don't have a map, those states are right next to each other)

Back to the story:
Nice touch, letting Relena get a joke in right off the bat, especially one that throws Heero off for a second

Heero was concerned about her undressing for the camera--that's not mission related *blush*
Bad DUO Bad!! ...with popcorn too...sheesh
SQUEEEE!!! "I?m the one who loves you, Relena" *aye me*
miz_lou: Now, was that so hard Heero??
Heero: ~~ Death glare
miz_lou: Don't play mister innocent. I wonder if you are only going to get off with just phrases and kisses...??
Heero: *sweatdrop*
How can it not?? There's almost no way around it...right??Stellar-Soldier wrote: This story's starting to get really interesting, though the conclusion to this chapter seems like it would move into a lemon-ish situation..

KEEP IT UP!!! Next CHAPTER!!
~miz_lou
